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Under the Knife

In surgery, it’s anesthesia That provides the buffer. The patient is oblivious And doesn’t have to suffer. The family, on the other hand, Must sit around and wait On pins and needles, wondering About their loved one’s fate. It’s easier to be the one Who’s underneath the knife. Awareness is suspended Of your worries and your strife. But for the friends and relatives, The hours stretch real slow. It’s agony to sit outside And not be in the know. At last, procedures have to end. Some news they will impart; And then we’ll all begin to breathe. Recovery will start.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/12/2012 10:53:00 PM
You highlight the alarm and worry of patients and relatives experiencing surgery so very well. Once again, your flow and rhyming are immaculate, and your enjambment! Super job!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/12/2012 7:05:00 AM
Recovery is when the patient pays the price to loved ones' jitters. However, recovery is the goal. But oh the pain when the goal is not met. Sorry to put a damper on your oh-so-true and happy poem. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/12/2012 3:04:00 AM
The wait... so horribly horribe... nice work... Terry
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Date: 5/11/2012 10:24:00 AM
ilene a pattern of life, I like it..David
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Date: 5/11/2012 5:09:00 AM
Wish you all the best....hope all are well in your family. - well written poem - oxox love Anne-Lise
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