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Under the Ducky Moon

Under The Ducky Moon The Winter had been Harsh, Harsher than Most. Now cabin fever had taken its toll. I was beginning to act a little bit weird, but so were others I know. Then suddenly the sun revealed itself, its warmth was beginning to show. Ice began to melt from the chair in my back yard, and yes it tempted me so… And then I snapped, its true, I know, with the melting of ice and snow. With every single drip… drip… drip… my mind began to go… I’d been stubborn and frozen to the core on many a winter’s day. As I had stayed by the window, while I’d typed my poems away. I had counted every icy day… toward those beautiful blessed Spring Rays… Then one day the temperature went from 8 to 78, and that took my breath away… I threw off the blankets that kept me warm and I danced…a lot I say! No matter how crazy it looked… I’d enjoy the January thaw, making hay! It’d soon be winter again, so I ran outside and chiseled the ice from that chair. Then in defiance I sat there as my dog slid over sheets of ice with flare. To our neighbors we must have looked crazy, like we didn’t have a clue. But they quickly turned back, to chiseling ice from their driveways anew. But my dog and I continued to stay disposed quite nice. After all there was only 4 inches of deep blue ice. Yep, I sat there and watched as water began streaming down the street so precise… I continued to sit there until I saw that the full moon had finally come out. Then I began to wonder if perhaps we should beware of the nutty people running about… As if!!! I answered. The Full moon’s got nothing on cabin fever. No doubt! I continued to watch until some ducks peacefully flew across the full moon that night… At that point, I knew my choice had been absolutely truly right… For the cold would come back, and I’d always remember my choice… This day would Forever be the day, when the Ducky Moon brought this story to voice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2015 10:17:00 AM
"To our neighbours we must have looked crazy!" YUP! We ain't done with winter yet... more sub freezing on the way! Maybe June will be nice! xxx
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Date: 5/14/2014 5:10:00 PM
How come I didn't read this one before? A fascinating story, masterfully written. I shall be back reading your oldest poems soonn
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Date: 8/25/2013 8:35:00 AM
Good morning Carol ,CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * Linda
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:21:00 PM
Carol ,congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)
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Date: 5/7/2011 12:10:00 PM
What a fun poem this is, carol. Your vacation story is different from the others and entertaining. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/6/2011 3:57:00 AM
Wonderful story, I loved it from beginning to end. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Carol. Lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:32:00 PM
it's the heart and soul that travel! a fine write with ny best congrats to you, carol... wow! :) huggs
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:06:00 PM
Carol, Have fun on your vacation , great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carol. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congrats Carol on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:55:00 PM
Wow! What an incredible poem, Carol. Wish I'd been there to see those ducks flying before the full moon. An awesome sight it must have been. Love you poem! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest.
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:24:00 PM
congrats on your win my friend.cory
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:21:00 PM
Very nice. Congrats
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Carol
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Carol on your 6th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2011 2:48:00 PM
An entertaining and amusing write! Thanks for sharing! Regards, Robert.
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