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a thousand chirpings silent the reflecting pond . . . a crows loud shrill call _______________ May 14, 2015 Poetry/Haiku/under the bridge Copyright Protected, ID 05-6766-63-14 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the contest, Picture Perfect Haiku First Place

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Date: 6/15/2015 8:17:00 PM
Nice win, Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:29:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Constance! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:43:00 AM
congrats on your win :"))
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:39:00 AM
love the contrast of silence with the shrill call and the chirpings!! Congrats, Constance.
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:49:00 AM
I just stopped by to say congrats on your big win:)Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:37:00 AM
It is an honor to share this haiku moment with you, Constance. This one is lovely !! Congrats to you!
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Date: 6/14/2015 8:38:00 AM
Constance, this is a most lovely haiku! .. and that crow's shrill call caps it all. Congrats on a top win...much deserved! // paul
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Date: 6/14/2015 4:15:00 AM
super Connie congrats on 1st place hugs 7
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:52:00 PM
Broken, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:30:00 PM
At last a great haiku!! A 7 at least, Constance!!!
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Date: 6/8/2015 11:09:00 AM
This comes across as quite emotive for me, Constance, and with with such a beautiful, yet melancholic image. Really enjoyed this. Also passed by to say that I will include Eve Snuggles (such an adorable name, and I bet a lovely cat) in my prayers, and pray for her healing...I am loving the name Pearl Smudges as well...I hope all will be well for Eve Snuggles.... nikko
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Date: 6/8/2015 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for the prayers and the lovely comment
Date: 5/27/2015 10:52:00 AM
Love the idea of danger this haiku offers. The silence is ominous. Love, daver
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Date: 5/25/2015 9:08:00 PM
Stunning... great entry for the contest! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:20:00 AM
It took me there...best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/24/2015 6:18:00 PM
oh boy, did we have to use the visuals, Constance?? eeeeks, I didn't know that! LOVE this, btw!!
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:53:00 PM
Wow. nicely crafted.
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:57:00 PM
beautifully penned - good luck in the contet:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2015 2:06:00 PM
This is beautiful! Great job. I'm glad stopped by. You a get a 7 from me. Good luck in the contest.Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2015 12:46:00 PM
This is lovely!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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Date: 5/24/2015 9:02:00 AM
Have you ever been in the solitude of nature and it is broken by a crows loud caw or is that just part of the silence . . .
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