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a thousand chirpings silent the reflecting pond . . . a crows loud shrill call _______________ May 14, 2015 Poetry/Haiku/under the bridge Copyright Protected, ID 05-6766-63-14 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the contest, Picture Perfect Haiku First Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2015 8:17:00 PM

Nice win, Luv ~LINDA~

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2015 2:29:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Constance! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Aiyah Torres

Date: 6/14/2015 10:43:00 AM

congrats on your win :"))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2015 10:39:00 AM

love the contrast of silence with the shrill call and the chirpings!! Congrats, Constance.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 9:49:00 AM

I just stopped by to say congrats on your big win:)Alexis

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2015 9:37:00 AM

It is an honor to share this haiku moment with you, Constance. This one is lovely !! Congrats to you!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2015 8:38:00 AM

Constance, this is a most lovely haiku! .. and that crow's shrill call caps it all. Congrats on a top win...much deserved! // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/14/2015 4:15:00 AM

super Connie congrats on 1st place hugs 7

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 8:52:00 PM

Broken, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Thomas Martin

Date: 6/8/2015 3:30:00 PM

At last a great haiku!! A 7 at least, Constance!!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2015 11:09:00 AM

This comes across as quite emotive for me, Constance, and with with such a beautiful, yet melancholic image. Really enjoyed this. Also passed by to say that I will include Eve Snuggles (such an adorable name, and I bet a lovely cat) in my prayers, and pray for her healing...I am loving the name Pearl Smudges as well...I hope all will be well for Eve Snuggles.... nikko

Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2015 2:34:00 PM