Pandita Sietesantos Poet Monorhyme

Under Stars One Autumn Night

Under Stars One Autumn Night

One breathtakingly beautiful Autumn night,
when sublime supernovas wondrously ignite,
showering the universe with blazing orange bright,
enveloping all with total madness and moonlight,
precisely at the stroke of mystical midnight -
just love me totally holding me tight,
‘neath a starry blanket of heavenly autumnal delight!


09-06-2014

Contest:      One Autumn Night (In Just 7 Lines)
Sponsor:     Poet Destroyer A
Placement:  11th

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Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2014 at 12:12 AM gorgeous AND romantic. Congrats on your poem!! Pandita Sietesantos December 29, 2014 at 10:10 AM Andrea, thanks again for returning to congratulate me! I appreciate your wonderful support! Best wishes. Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2014 at 6:43 PM thanks for always supporting my comments. Linda

Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 1:15 PM Dropping back with my congrats Pandita-) Hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos December 27, 2014 at 4:02 PM Jan, thank you for your continued support, my friend! Best wishes to you always! Pandita.

Poet Destroyer A December 27, 2014 at 10:07 AM PANDITA, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA Pandita Sietesantos December 27, 2014 at 4:01 PM Hi Linda, thank you for placing me in your contest. It was fun and I enjoyed writing this piece. Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich November 21, 2014 at 9:22 PM hey this is some brilliant monorhyming here. Very nicely done!!! Pandita Sietesantos November 21, 2014 at 11:15 PM Also thank you, Andrea, for helping me to properly categorize the form as "Monorhyme." I had originally listed it as a "Rhyme." Pandita Sietesantos November 21, 2014 at 11:09 PM Yeah! Thank you so much for the sweet compliments which greatly encourage me in my writing. Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Terry O'Leary October 23, 2014 at 5:08 AM Beautiful!! Pandita Sietesantos October 23, 2014 at 7:34 AM Hi Terry, I am so happy you like this one. Thank you for the beautiful compliment, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita

Robert Lindley October 11, 2014 at 10:39 PM Out of sight, your words so very right better to love than to fight, your poem -what a sight! Bravoooo, super 7 and a delight to read! Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 12:22 AM Thank you so very much Robert for rating this piece so high and for the great compliments! I am super happy that you enjoyed it! Pandita

Liam Mcdaid September 24, 2014 at 4:58 PM beautifully crafted excellent pen Pandita Sietesantos September 25, 2014 at 6:47 AM Hi Liam, I am so humbled by your wonderful compliments which are so encouraging to me! Thank you my friend for your kind support. Pandita

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri September 16, 2014 at 12:33 AM Wow an appealing poem that ends romantic in overall such attractive glorious rhyming. I always love supernovas in poetry. So nice to read u again pandita. Pandita Sietesantos September 20, 2014 at 1:57 PM Hi my friend, it's good to hear from you and many thanks for your lovely compliments. Enjoy the weekend! Pandita

Bianca And Gerhard September 10, 2014 at 3:56 AM A wonderful poem with romantic landscapes ! Pandita Sietesantos September 10, 2014 at 10:37 AM Bianca and Gerhard, I thank you kindly for visiting and for your wonderful compliments, my friends! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Maurice Yvonne September 8, 2014 at 10:21 PM This is wonderful. Well written and from the heart. Pandita Sietesantos September 9, 2014 at 9:24 AM Hi Maurice, I am so happy you like this one. Thank you for the compliments, my friend! Pandita

Shadow Hamilton September 8, 2014 at 4:54 PM a poem full of feelings and so romantic Pandita gl in contest hugs Pandita Sietesantos September 9, 2014 at 9:23 AM Shadow, I am so happy that you appreciate my humble efforts! Thank you my friend! Pandita

Harry Horsman September 7, 2014 at 3:20 PM amazing poetry,, took me right there,,, Pandita Sietesantos September 7, 2014 at 3:42 PM I am so happy you like this one. Thank you for the compliments, my friend!Pandita

Lucilla Carrillo September 6, 2014 at 10:44 PM Beautiful poem. I see you got the Autumn sprit. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Pandita Sietesantos September 7, 2014 at 12:50 AM Hi Lucilla, it's good to hear from you and many thanks for your lovely compliments. Enjoy the rest of your weekend! Pandita

Charmaine Chircop September 6, 2014 at 5:48 PM A fantastic piem.with an amazing flow ,Pandita!!! Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 7:42 PM Charmaine, I thank you so very kindly for your wonderful compliments, my friend! have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Jan Allison September 6, 2014 at 2:28 PM stunning imagery Pandita! I hope this does really well for you...it a 7 from me! Hugs Jan xxx Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 5:34 PM Jan, I can't tell you how much that means to me! Thank you so very kindly! Pandita

Kika Ayala September 6, 2014 at 11:59 AM Pandita, this is such a sublime write! Well done, my friend! This is now one of my favorites! Kika Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 12:07 PM Kika, I am so happy that you appreciate my humble efforts! Thank you my friend! Pandita