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Under Moonlight

the sky abounds with stars tonight
reflections dance across the sea
from far beyond a melody
igniting thoughts of you and me

so miles apart we'd spend in flight
in eagerness to cross the sea
meanwhile distance calls in whispers sweet
and rhythmics sway as one heartbeat

moonlight sultry calls and beckons
for lovers underneath to meet
to bask in warmth and saltiness of air
arm in arm to walk for miles along the beach


AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:41 PM
My heart beats faster just reading this. What a romantic poem. I learned this one in college. "Two things that can tear my heart in two, moonlight on still pools and you" Your poem makes me think of this one. Moonlight is truly one of my favorite things. It is so calm, peaceful and comforting, especially on water. I'm so lucky and happy to have found your poem. It is 10:30 pm now in the north east and I am going outside for a minute with my husband to find the moon.
Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Marikate ~ most appreciated
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Hello Lin, this is so romantic. I felt the passion. Hugs./Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:26 AM
HelloLin, thank you. the same for you. /Darlene\
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thank you very much, Darlene. Have a lovely day ~
Baker Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:24 PM
The moon does add a sense of romance to a beach walk. Have a good day, my friend. Bill
Gauthier Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 6:02 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Bill.
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