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Under Cat's Paw

Silent moth, lonely 
Spirit, your dark beauty screams
Trapped under cat’s paw.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 10, 2011 at 6:54 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week mike. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2011 at 8:59 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Mike

Ashley Plotczyk

June 6, 2011 at 2:43 PM

Clever. Nice work. :) Congrats on your feature.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 23, 2010 at 3:29 AM

Perfect imagery, Mike. Keep up the good writes. They are uplifting during life's plights. Smiling, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

January 16, 2010 at 8:33 AM

Welcome Mike look forward to reading more from your pen.Thank you for your welcome comments today .Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

January 15, 2010 at 2:23 PM

Oh, this is really quite good! Luv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

January 15, 2010 at 1:44 PM

you made me feel sorry for a moth!! good job, that is not easy.

Sara Kendrick

January 15, 2010 at 12:43 PM

Very descriptive Haiku that you have written here. I can see the playful cat but a moth that is struggling to be free. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem about Big Daddy. I enjoyed writing that one and sharing that experience with everyone here. Sara

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