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Hurricane Eye Eye of hurricane

under the desk in her bed shaking.... the dog fears the storm restlessly napping, listen wind, rain, acorns fall never know what might fall or happen next

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/27/2024 3:23:00 PM

I can really picture this one. Fine portrait of what really happens, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2024 4:02:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2024 11:35:00 AM

Poor doggy. I hope you will be safe from natural disasters, Sara. You live where tornadoes are possible, right?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2024 1:04:00 PM

Andrea, Helene, the hurricane came up through our state, but we ended up being on the side of the storm that did not cause as much damage. We had a lot of rain and some wind but not as much wind as they had predicted. Pipi is just terrified of stormy weather. Sara K