Undeniably Ursula Premiere Contest Winner

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On tundra that is intent to destroy and defy,
the winds and the ice will attempt to deny 
any who are willing to stray across boundaries.
Those who are willing to scale up a mountain, 
or leap over the crevice of an alien divide.

She has walked us through valleys without windows or doors where we
learn to escape what we once knew before,
teetering on the ledge of an unexplored world.

She reflects on a land where the mind speaks in tongues,
where gender is one,  not clearly defined.
So how does she convince a rational world
to balance its logic on this delusional scale,
while blurring the borders so frozen in time?

Her pen sculpts in waves that can touch the horizon,
with nothing to offer but ice and illusion.
She tells us of friendship, of soul mates
who'll stray across lines,
twining two spirits as if they were one.

Do we believe in the end, where conclusions are sought,
on a kinship so true, there is no simple "who"?
Where lies the truth? Is the left then, the right?
Are there those who will doubt? Are there those who believe? Is it he, is it she?
To cut, paste, define what is love, what is not?
Is dark so dark, or light so light?
Or are the two just as one, as lovers might be?


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2/14/18
Inspired by the contest: "Ursula De Guin"
Sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/6/2018 3:29:00 PM
You have come back with a vengeance, Carrie!!:) Congratulations on placing first with this 'Undeniably Richards' flair for words! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 3/4/2018 10:45:00 PM
This piece is enthralling Carrie! I have not read the book but you make me want to. Congratulations on your trophy First Placement my friend! Excellent! : )
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Date: 3/4/2018 9:29:00 PM
I'm glad to see you inspiring new readers for this wonderful author. I so happy to read your verse again. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/4/2018 9:05:00 PM
I always enjoy your writing and this is no exception even though I am Ursula-ignorant. Congratulations - your poem is profound and compelling. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/4/2018 8:24:00 PM
I'm thinking this is an amazing advertisement for the book/author. Kudos for your first place win here. Well-deserved, Carrie.
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Date: 3/4/2018 7:36:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Carrie. A most enjoyable read.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/4/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you for the nice compliment, Line ! My appreciation for all of your kind comments !
Date: 3/4/2018 7:11:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win for this amazing poem. I have not yet read this book, but after reading your poem I am determined to do so. The brilliant way you have written this really draws me in! Wonderful! Hugs, Sandra
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/4/2018 7:52:00 PM
It was a complex and interesting novel, Sandra !! Thank you for your encouragement! :)
Date: 3/4/2018 6:31:00 PM
Amazing, Carrie, you captured the book ... congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/4/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve !! I'm proud to be next to you! This was a complex book to write about !
Date: 3/4/2018 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations! Enjoyed!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/4/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Kim!
Date: 3/4/2018 4:46:00 PM
As I said in my comments to Eve Roper, this novel is beyond my comprehension. Your images and verses give me great insight. Congrats on a top win.
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:13:00 AM
That last Stanza is an absolute belter in a fine piece of poetry, Carrie. Good luck in the contest! Viv x
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:59:00 PM
many questions, everyone has answers, no one has answers, everyone believes something it's just something may be nothing, so we hope, we yearn, we struggle, not realizing love may be the best thing we'll ever know, and sometimes we go through all these things and forget to live...my first thought after reading dear poet
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Date: 2/15/2018 8:26:00 AM
You did this so well, I do not know who Ursula is, as I do not read much.. but this flows well.. Let me answer some of the questions in the last stanza. I would say no, we will only know truth when we die, oooh maybe it is nothing, what is love? An emotion that someone cannot control at one set moment of time, both and yes. lol
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Date: 2/14/2018 9:58:00 PM
ahhh yes Carrie so wonderful to hear from you & read your verse again. Light & Love Always
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