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Undefined Fractures

You measure by mass— diamond resolve turning quietly, its shape carved from silence, creating shards of tension. Light bending—crystallizing in my shell, waiting to crack open in the name of weightless worth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/17/2025 8:24:00 AM
Laura, an interesting set of ideas presented here. Ideas as weightless worth seem like the best any diamond has to offer. Take care and keep the ideas coming! Smiles!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/22/2025 2:41:00 PM
Smiles.. you are always so thoughtful. Appreciate your light in my world…
Date: 2/13/2025 2:33:00 PM
What an amazing poem of putting this all together in such a elegant way , shinning a brilliant light that comes from being purified and molded into a glorious gem: )
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/22/2025 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Stephan. Your words, your thoughts are important to me..<3
Date: 2/11/2025 3:55:00 PM
The poetry and truth of your visions have never been more beautiful Poetess...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/12/2025 4:39:00 AM
You’re still my favorite poet Justin - your words mean more than you know <3

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