Rainbows

Airy prisms fly and leap enthusiastic arches sweep in a jubilant celebration nature’s centerpiece from heaven. Living composition breathes created with aplomb and ease painting from Creator’s hand perfectly placed at His command. Jacob’s coat in neon flies o’er the land a banner to rise angels spread their velvet wings spinning ribbons as they sing. Wedding dance on earth alights under firmament’s festive lights seen below or from the stars watching wondrously from afar. Written on 10/22/2018

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John Lawless

Date: 11/10/2018 8:40:00 AM

....They do conjure up a plethora of visuals.....Well done Laura..

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/10/2018 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, John! Glad you liked my poem :)

Gary Smith

Date: 11/10/2018 6:12:00 AM

A lovely poem Laura, congrats. :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/10/2018 8:47:00 AM

Than you, Gary! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/9/2018 10:34:00 PM

I love your beautiful entry Laura. I am so glad to see this gem on the winner's list! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 10:52:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Connie! So glad you liked this! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/9/2018 10:18:00 PM

Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 10:51:00 PM

Thank you, Line! :)

Gary Smith

Date: 11/9/2018 7:35:00 PM

Excellent poetry Laura, much enjoyed. :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 8:58:00 PM

Thank you, Gary! :)

Craig Cornish

Date: 11/9/2018 7:13:00 PM

When I saw this I knew it would be among the best. It is a celebration! Thank you Laura

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 7:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for placing me in your challenging contest, Craig! I’m so glad you like my poem! :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/9/2018 10:35:00 AM

Lovely rainbow piece Laura, so light touches that stills our heart. Superbly penned. Blessings, Gordon

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/9/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thanks, Gordon! So glad you enjoyed this! :)

Susan Rigo

Date: 11/7/2018 1:04:00 PM

Stunning work. I really enjoy reading your work.

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/7/2018 1:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan! :)

Dedu Son

Date: 10/23/2018 12:36:00 PM

Beautifully composed.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, Dedu! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/23/2018 9:36:00 AM

Awesome poem, Laura. Superb imagery.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thanks so much, Line! I’m happy you enjoyed my poem! :)

James Study

Date: 10/23/2018 8:49:00 AM

An easy read, very nice.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you, James! I’m glad you enjoyed this. :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/23/2018 8:44:00 AM

Beautiful verse Laura, natures centerpiece a gift from above. Well written. Tom.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! So glad you liked this one. :)

Silent One

Date: 10/23/2018 8:01:00 AM

This is so beautiful.. so nice to see you writing again...

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you, Silent! I’m finally dipping my pen back into the poetic ink. :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/23/2018 7:20:00 AM

Laura, simply beautiful ~

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Constance! Your comments encourage me to keep writing. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/23/2018 6:26:00 AM

You painted a beautiful centerpiece here with ease. Rhythmic words sound like music..wonderful flow to your poem. A win for you, Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 10/23/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! Your kind comments are so encouraging :)