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Uncontrollable Feeling

Her attitude. Her Grace. The outlook on life for her is like a dove. It will slowly fly by, peacefully, and controllably. Her beautiful face. She has potential to be successful. God watches as his creation grows up. He gets a tear in his eye. The universe cries out to her, Kayli, Kayli, Kayli. I adore her so greatly. Her will and spirit to live, rings out through the heavens. For I too get a tear in my eye. Kayli, Kayli, Kayli. Dedication to my sister!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/21/2010 3:04:00 PM
I am so very proud that you like my poetry. Thank you for your kind words. I am in the process of reading your work..very sweet and with a fresh look. May I ask how old your are? ;I hope we can be new friends. BG
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Date: 11/17/2010 2:41:00 PM
Beautiful dedication! Your sister should be proud to have such a brother! I know I would be!
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Date: 11/16/2010 11:07:00 PM
Tayler, This is a wonderful dedication to your sister, Kayli. I'm sure she is proud of you. Thanks for sharing this also. Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:24:00 PM
such a sweet dedication, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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