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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ time, as great love, is the Unchangeable-- for it is there at the end as it was at the start

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/19/2024 6:14:00 PM

One can never get enough of either. Very thought-provoking, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/20/2024 9:44:00 AM

I agree, Jerry...thanks for stopping by and for enjoying the thought-provoking nature of my poem. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2024 12:44:00 PM

The problem is that we think we have time... I enjoyed your thought provoking short poem..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/20/2024 9:43:00 AM

I agree...because we can't actually 'see' time, the sense of urgency escapes us at time. Thanks for your visit...have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2024 3:30:00 AM

So true Sara, the world needs a lot of it right now. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/19/2024 6:44:00 AM

I agree with you, Tom. thanks for dropping by, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 1/19/2024 3:01:00 AM

What a deep and intriguing kimo is this! Dear sara you always amaze me with how you deliver thoughts in such a delicate and flawless fashion, ensuring that we as readers feel your words and thoughts on a soul level. It was there at the start, it was there at the end, somethings like love it never changes. And time, always shows us that. I love how you’ve included the hourglass picture with this makes me think even deeper. I found this very heartfelt! Pleasure reading you

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/19/2024 6:45:00 AM

thank you, kind Ink, for your in depth reading and interpretation of my Kimo. You're spot on with my intent...the message shrouded in intriguing words. Grateful for you and your support. Have a pleasant weekend, hugs, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2024 7:50:00 PM

Can't argue with that, Sara. Very clever understanding of time. :) gw

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/19/2024 6:45:00 AM

thank you, Gershon! Appreciate you, your visits, and your comments.

Chetta Achara

Date: 1/18/2024 7:12:00 PM

Very nice.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/19/2024 6:46:00 AM

thank you for dropping by and for your comment. Have a lovely day, Sara