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Unchained

A melody unchained in my mind a movement uncloaked and I'm undone missing of musings esteemed write for me a song so sweet a soliloquy of love painted in a mid-day dream where two hearts come and breathe where yesterday's meet tomorrow and today is forever young nature's sung within the treetops swaying aside your hips oh how I long to kiss your lips mouthing of words that are right written in the heat of night or day I say, I will stay n'er stray to a wondering eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/10/2018 1:48:00 PM
Hello Tim. This entry is so soft and gentle. I very much enjoyed your title to which you never strayed. Wonderful poetry. May this day find you well.
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Date: 5/10/2018 9:50:00 AM
This is so pretty.
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Date: 5/9/2018 6:09:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 5/8/2018 7:36:00 PM
Gah this is so beautiful!
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Date: 5/8/2018 4:49:00 PM
Nice lines in this Tim. Beautiful. :)
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Date: 5/8/2018 4:48:00 PM
This is romantic and sweet...promises to never stray and promises meant to stay, indeed.
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Date: 5/8/2018 1:12:00 PM
ooh err Mr Smith another gem of a romantic poem.. love is in the air:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2018 10:00:00 AM
On my limerick you said you'd never tell. lol Tim. You earn your title with thoughts such as these.
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