Unchained

A melody unchained in my mind a movement uncloaked and I'm undone missing of musings esteemed write for me a song so sweet a soliloquy of love painted in a mid-day dream where two hearts come and breathe where yesterday's meet tomorrow and today is forever young nature's sung within the treetops swaying aside your hips oh how I long to kiss your lips mouthing of words that are right written in the heat of night or day I say, I will stay n'er stray to a wondering eye
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Ricci Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Hello Tim. This entry is so soft and gentle. I very much enjoyed your title to which you never strayed. Wonderful poetry. May this day find you well.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:50 AM
This is so pretty.
Sathasivam Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:09 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it.
Hopper Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:36 PM
Gah this is so beautiful!
Sands Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Nice lines in this Tim. Beautiful. :)
Manassian Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 4:48 PM
This is romantic and sweet...promises to never stray and promises meant to stay, indeed.
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 1:12 PM
ooh err Mr Smith another gem of a romantic poem.. love is in the air:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:00 AM
On my limerick you said you'd never tell. lol Tim. You earn your title with thoughts such as these.
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