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Unbroken Rhapsody


Music blended with nature's dark, unbroken cadence and rhapsody.

Waves crashing vigorously, reverberating in my mind with the graceful notes of 
the piano, the fragrance of wet foliage and the perfume of wildflowers mingling,
I perceive a view of inspiration for this poet's muse.

Twittering, chirping birds wrapped in the cadenza of a gentle flute drifting, a 
bouquet delicate, and pleasing, entwined in the scent of the forest, my wandering 
spirit comes closer for a sweet magical glimpse.

The whisper of the wind, a symphony tangled with the violin's quivering, throbbing
melody, such redolence, this penetrating overture for my soul, I lift my eyes to
God's painted sky, gazing beyond the clouds, floating in this unbroken rhapsody.

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September 16, 2015


Poetry/Free Verse/Unbroken Rhapsody
Copyright Protected, ID 15-709-929-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Mixed Senses, 
sponsor, Nette OnClaud

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Awesome write broken! Congrats on big win!
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 3:45 PM
a rhapsody that fills my senses, constance.. great tempo for the theme.. big congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 3:02 AM
Your poem is so lovely, Broken Wings, and your mixed senses come together like a symphony! Congratulations on your nice win Sandra
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October 2, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Broken,, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
Tor Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Loved the musical charm. Nice Win Broken Wings.
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful write!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 4:27 PM
this is just gorgeous for the musical theme, Constance. Congrats in the contest.
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 4:13 PM
I am enjoying the appeal to the senses, Constance, especially through the music of sounds. ~ Congratulations on a lovely win! // paul
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:37 PM
a delightful mix of nature and music congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Tor Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Very eloquent and unique Broken Wings. Every word flowing in perfect harmony of description and a supreme level of poetry.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:58 PM
- A wonderful mix of nature's music and beautiful words, B.W. - A winning poem .... good luck - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
Boddie Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:29 PM
as your pen strums my heart....this unbroken melody starts....Beautifying in every single part....bw your art is at the top of the charts....;)
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