Unbound

Oh, how much I wish...

To be infinite like the space
To not let the frets of life
fetter my freewill
To flap my wings of fantasy and fly high
To feel the blissful blue
and whisper a secret to the sky

To become the sun atleast for one day
shining bright with special kind of rays
rays that spread messages of peace
to every living being they touch

To be free atleast for one day
from the daily hassles of life
To allow my mind to meander
through unknown locations
To be able to step onto
all those places, 
to where, like flamingos, 
my thoughts migrate
To touch the soils of the lands I reach
To speak in their native tongues
and listen to their untold stories

                                        ... to be unbound

Date: 11/09/2022
Writing Challenge - Unburden A "U" Word - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 1/20/2023 5:46:00 PM
I don't think I ever congratulated you on this one . So glad you won. Can't wait to see more of your beautiful poetry
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Date: 1/1/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas toward a prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/27/2022 12:41:00 PM
It is a shame you are not writing as much as you were.. I miss your poems.. i really like this one, especially the ending to it.. I hope you are well.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/28/2022 1:45:00 AM
Thank you so much S1 for the visit and comment... I wish to find time to write more... You have always encouraged me to write..from the time I joined Soup... You are and have been a great inspiration for me to write poems... Am good my friend... I hope you are well too... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 12/17/2022 4:32:00 PM
Anitha, Quite nice. Unbound's whispered secret and travel in tongues unwinds the very best in a heart's strings. -Richard
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 12/28/2022 1:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and the comment Richard... God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 11/21/2022 12:50:00 PM
Ani, congratulations on your win! A poem that truly reflects the freedom of the soul to soar! Thanks for the flight lessons! Sending you blessings of wings!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/24/2022 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sam for the visit and the lovely comment... Have a great day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/17/2022 6:23:00 AM
I love this Ani ! I will travel with you and whisper a secret to the sky and become the sun for at least a day ! Just beautiful. Your heart and soul shine here . Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest . Big hugs my friend . Xoxo Susan :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/19/2022 1:01:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation of my poem... Big hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/16/2022 12:32:00 PM
wow, this is beautiful and I am so glad to see it got into Constance's contest in time. Way to go. you are so creative, dear friend.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/18/2022 10:49:00 PM
Ria, thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation of my poem.. Big hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/15/2022 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/18/2022 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara... for the visit, comment and congrats... Love and respect... ~ Ani
Date: 11/14/2022 6:02:00 AM
Ani, your poem is beautiful and wonderfully presented, I love it and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/14/2022 8:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Constance for the wonderful contest, the inspiration and my placement... Enjoyed writing for your contest as always... Sure, I'll try my level best to write for your new contest dear sponsor... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/9/2022 5:33:00 AM
Delightfully traversing in meadows of boundless joy. Enjoyed the cheerful voice of your poem, Ani.
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Date: 11/14/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijayji for the visit and comment... Much appreciate... God bless... ~ Ani
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