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Unborn Dream

Of one unborn dream Lone in a magical wood Dressed like a princess Catching a soft falling star That'll make wishes come true By- Tahera Mannan For the contest-'Tanka me a Dream' sponsored by Micheal J Falotico.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/14/2011 11:00:00 PM
Ahhh one that I missed. the dream of the young girl. VERY nice, Tahera!
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:27:00 PM
This is lovely...thank you for supporting my work... all the best Julie
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:58:00 AM
Well Tahera this is an awesome Tanka from you!This is like a sweet melody--kashinath
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Date: 2/12/2011 1:45:00 PM
This is so enchanting, so gentle, wistful, I love it, best of luck~~
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:25:00 PM
A very descriptively pretty tanka that looks good for entering in Michael's contest.
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