Unborn Dream

Of one unborn dream
Lone in a magical wood
Dressed like a princess
Catching a soft falling star
That'll make wishes come true

By- Tahera Mannan

For the contest-'Tanka me a Dream' sponsored by Micheal J Falotico.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 11:00 PM
Ahhh one that I missed. the dream of the young girl. VERY nice, Tahera!
Heckman Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 8:27 PM
This is lovely...thank you for supporting my work... all the best Julie
Poet Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 1:58 AM
Well Tahera this is an awesome Tanka from you!This is like a sweet melody--kashinath
La France Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 1:45 PM
This is so enchanting, so gentle, wistful, I love it, best of luck~~
Pettit Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 10:25 PM
A very descriptively pretty tanka that looks good for entering in Michael's contest.
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