Unbearable Beauty In Blue

Standing on a mountain peak
I find myself surrounded 
by a breezy cerulean sky.
How peaceful and restful 
is heaven’s hue.
Nature has breathed her essence on me.

Later I bathe in deep aqua blue
and again I am amazed.
How soothing and serene
is nature’s watery embrace.
How warm the caress 
of this tropical sea.

Midnight’s blue has found me now.
My soul is imbued with tranquility
as I stand again on the mountain peak
gazing up at an indigo immensity
where myriads of diamonds
glitter unbearable beauty to me.
How wonderful all of it is.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/1/2017 9:50:00 AM
Andrea, this poem is cut off listed in the best tranquility poems. I think you could correct the problem by not centering it. This is beautiful! I had to click on it to see it in its entirety. : )
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Date: 7/6/2017 10:40:00 AM
Bluest of blue Andrea, congratulations.
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Date: 7/6/2017 5:28:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your well-deserved first placement with this awesome verse!! ;-)
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Date: 7/5/2017 9:59:00 AM
Well, it looks like I went beyond the mountain peak to seek heaven's hue and burned my wings! lol
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Date: 7/5/2017 9:38:00 AM
Another fine win for this excellent poem Andrea, congrats on a fine write and win!
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Date: 7/5/2017 8:32:00 AM
An exquisite poem, Andrea. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/5/2017 6:42:00 AM
This is LOVELY! Andrea, congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 4/23/2016 3:26:00 PM
I admit, I had to look up cerulean. ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 7:35:00 AM
Awesome win...lady.....Luv. .Linda
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Date: 3/5/2016 12:55:00 PM
How wonderful all of it is. A Fav!
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Date: 3/3/2016 7:39:00 AM
Such a knack with imagery. I have never loved the color blue until I read these lines.
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:52:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/1/2016 12:01:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem.
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Date: 3/1/2016 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 3/1/2016 3:24:00 AM
Wonderful piece of work,,Andrea..Congrats on your win..And thanks for visiting my page...
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Date: 3/1/2016 12:53:00 AM
Blue is a pretty dynamite color, Andrea, and it covers the majority of our vision ... the ocean, the sky. Congrats on the contest win!
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Date: 2/29/2016 6:28:00 PM
Hi Andie, love the calming lines you displayed through your poems, I wanna be there too.. =`) I'm glad to drop by on your page at this time, being busy doing and preparing lots of things.. =`) but am happy! we are happy! ;)~smiles and hugs, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 2/29/2016 5:15:00 PM
You paint three nice pictures with words Andrea - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 2/29/2016 4:39:00 PM
Nature has bathed her essence on me...lovely! Congratulations on your third placement Andrea. It is great to be in your company and the others too. So many great entries in this contest. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:58:00 PM
All aint sad that's blue, eh. Like Little Boy Blue who found the cows in the corn and was a real rock star with his geetar and his horn. Enough! I am simply dazzled by your sense of beauty. Love, daver
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:56:00 PM
Lovely...Im lost in your BLUE...BG
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:25:00 PM
ohh, enchanting me with this blue beauty: so serene and image-laden, andie... huggs
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Date: 2/29/2016 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful Nature! Green + Blue poem I would like to read again :)
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Date: 2/29/2016 7:53:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go with this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..I feel relaxed after reading of blue's awesome influence on our world..Sara
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Date: 2/29/2016 5:37:00 AM
- Andrea, this is truly a gem - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest :) - One 7 and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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