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Why in my nightmares do I beat a girl in my dream, never the same scene, but in anger I rant and scream? In the back of my mind, could it be my dead sister, while alive and near, I never told her I loved her. 12/8/2017 Poetry Contest: Unanswered Questions Sponsored by: Juli- Michelle

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Date: 5/5/2018 7:04:00 PM
Wow, Eve. A very troubling and emotive write. Belated congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 2/1/2018 9:29:00 AM
A sad one Eve. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/31/2018 7:46:00 PM
Wow, very poignant. Well done.
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Date: 1/30/2018 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve. :))
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Date: 1/29/2018 7:07:00 PM
Nightmares can provide so many mysteries for us, Eve. Congratulations on your podium win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/29/2018 3:56:00 PM
True or fiction, beautifully sad, congratulations on your placement... Mick
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Date: 1/29/2018 3:52:00 PM
Wow! Congrats, Eve!
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Date: 1/29/2018 3:18:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2017 12:20:00 AM
So bittersweet. I empathise. But it may not be your sister you are beating. x
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/21/2017 11:28:00 AM
:) thank you
Date: 12/19/2017 4:37:00 PM
I can't wait to see the winners of this contest. It was so interesting to me .Was just trying to find something of yours to see but I can't seem to find a newer poem I have not already read. If you can think of an older one I may not have ever seen, let me know, Eve.
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Date: 12/18/2017 2:02:00 AM
Nicely written ... I am inclined to agree with SO ...
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Date: 12/12/2017 8:05:00 PM
Dreams are great for inspiration but i try to never over think them. This is pure and dark and true poetry. I think it's amazing.
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Date: 12/10/2017 6:50:00 AM
It could be a number of things, it could also be your beating yourself, it may be doubt... Might be a good idea to get it interpreted...
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Date: 12/8/2017 5:47:00 PM
I really like this unique take in the contest, Eve. I can see this being a real thing for you. I have had such strange dreams myself. I am sure for a repeated dream it does have some significance!
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:48:00 PM
Hope this was fiction Eve, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:45:00 PM
Eve, a haunting question, a nightmare really, best of luck in the contest, and I am also haunted by ghosts and words I should have said in life, so I know how you feel...
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:05:00 PM
Sad..I hope that this is just based on a question and not your life or your nightmare..Reads like a good contender for the contest..Sara.Thanks for the visit to my page..
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Date: 12/8/2017 2:14:00 PM
Oh wow that packs a punch, potent penning! Winner in my books xomo
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Date: 12/8/2017 1:55:00 PM
aww Eve this is so sad on so many levels:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/8/2017 2:29:00 PM
Very true story .... it does hurt :'(

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