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Un-Ruffled Feathers

I didn’t ask for help.
Yet someone heard
my inward crying voice
without a word.

“When the student is ready
a teacher will appear”
somehow it seems these teachers
pop up everywhere.

Their words were subtle
pointed darts
that caused me endless
fits, and starts.

There was no Hallelujah Chorus
no heraldry of trumpets din
just a presence in my life
every now and then.

I never asked for help
yet somehow they saw my need
and placed within my heart
an ever growing seed.

They cut the bindings loose
freed me from my tethers
drifted slowly through my life
without ruffling my feathers.


©8/10/2018

for New Rhyming Poems On Angels Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/21/2018 5:13:00 PM
I love your take on the 'angel' theme, John. “When the student is ready a teacher will appear”...this happens so often, and one knows inside that something is moving us. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra :)
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Date: 8/18/2018 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 2:03:00 AM
A great poem, John, congrats! Regards, Viv
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations, John on your win.
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Date: 8/16/2018 1:22:00 PM
I know they read our thoughts John. A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 8/16/2018 12:43:00 PM
This is fantastic. A fave.
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Date: 8/16/2018 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations John, your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Angels" contest. Very well done my friend, it was a hard contest to judge, Emile.
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