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Un-Ringing the Bells

Un-Ringing the Bells To live in the shadow of the steeples the tintinnabulation of Poe’s bells* tormenting the sinners as they slumber wrestling the darkened dreams of childhood hells following the path that led asunder “the road less traveled”** challenging the norm a vagabond in tattered memories wandering through an endless self-made storm. Awaken - the bells possess no power - cold hands that call dead clappers to concuss tremble at the thought the ropes are fraying fear’s ancient tones now deadened under rust. Yet their vibration lingers at days start within the chest still beats their “Telltale Heart”***. 1/3/2017 With acknowledgement to *The Bells – Edgar Allen Poe **The Road Not Taken – Robert Frost ***The Telltale Heart – Edgar Allen Poe submitted to – Sonnet about where you live – Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/7/2017 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations, John, on your sonnet win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/7/2017 5:31:00 PM
Back again, to now congratulate you on a fine win!
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Date: 1/5/2017 2:21:00 PM
Great sonnet, every verse a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest... Adding to my fav list as this fine sonnet speaks to me ...Super 7 my friend..
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Date: 1/3/2017 10:19:00 AM
What a fantastic piece of writing John. I like how you have used a few of the classics to weave in through this wonderful thought provoking piece. Like I have just been on a trip of wondrous proportions. Also...liked the us of "tintinnabulation".
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John Lawless
Date: 1/4/2017 6:41:00 AM
The first time I heard a reading of Poe's "The Bells" was the first time I heard the word "tintinnabulation" and I never forgot it..."the tintinnabulation of the bells, those bells, bells,bells,bells"...(and that was some 55 years ago.)

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