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Un-Nice

Today is the first day of the rest of your life The best day ever, no matter how it's sliced You're breathing in air With happiness to share Keeping it to yourself is really un-nice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/16/2017 8:52:00 AM
Listen up folks, Jack speaks truth!//Don't believe me? Ask Dr. Ruth.//Be extra nice//especially to mice//Anything less is uncouth. BREATH ON JACKSON!!!
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Date: 7/15/2017 7:22:00 AM
You have written a fabulous poem here Jack! I really enjoyed reading this elaborate, hilariously perfect poem for the heart! Great Work!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/15/2017 7:44:00 AM
You are ALWAYS so kind Russell... I remember! Thanks for the umpteenth time!!!
Date: 7/15/2017 6:43:00 AM
Another fine one. This one like the last speaks the truth. It would un kind to touch either one of these babies:)
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Date: 7/15/2017 7:45:00 AM
Love your comments about not commenting! LOL

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