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Ummmm-Contra

in the bathroom That's wear it, was i think or was: it in the other sink The kitchen sink The other batheroom sink. the sink that's so rink-a-dink and and pink and full of ink that I, can't drink, wink wink Wait I know where it is...................hhmmmm......what was i looking for 10/06/2018

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Nancy Beckman

Date: 11/15/2018 5:58:00 PM

I like how you fragmented the sentences. Nice verse, James!

James Inman
Date: 11/15/2018 7:22:00 PM

Hi Nancy, thanks for the visit.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/22/2018 10:44:00 AM

Nicely done James, congratulations. Tom.

James Inman
Date: 10/22/2018 4:13:00 PM

Thanks Tom

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/22/2018 10:16:00 AM

LOL James. Congrats on your placement.

James Inman
Date: 10/22/2018 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Line.

Constance La France

Date: 10/10/2018 11:41:00 AM

James, quite contemporary like modern art, it does not have to make sense, love it~

James Inman
Date: 10/10/2018 12:59:00 PM

Hi BW, thank you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/9/2018 10:40:00 PM

This is nice kinda poetry, James, thoughtful hmmm:)

James Inman
Date: 10/10/2018 7:14:00 AM

Hi Jo, thanks for the visit

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/8/2018 3:20:00 AM

my kind of poetry, nice!

James Inman
Date: 10/8/2018 6:33:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Arthur.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2018 12:02:00 PM

very contemporary, james... you got my attention particularly the last lines... huggs

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2018 12:49:00 PM

Hi Nette, if you are familiar with the book "Hitch Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy" you know they speak of the worst poetry in the galaxy. That is what this is supposed to be, for the Contra Contest. Have you entered (then again I don't think you can write bad poetry : ) ?