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Umbrella Dreams

Sunset,
It has its way..
To gently touch my heart
While taking my breath away, but
Right now

Right now,
It lingers here..
On umbrella dreams,
I am lost in awe just waiting,
For you

For you,
Just to hold me..
Like the sky holds beauty, 
With grace and even with love so, 
Tender

Tender,
Are these moments.. 
That dance wild, yet so calm,
Stay close to me always in the,
Sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/26/2018 5:13:00 PM
"Tender are these moments that dance wild" to me this is very sensual and thoughts of love linger in my mind. sighing... John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/26/2018 7:03:00 PM
Perhaps. Or this thought could mean a tender touch has been flamed, but then it is softly tamed. I appreciated your lovely comment. Thank you John. ~ Brandy
Date: 6/29/2018 9:44:00 PM
Your poem is delicate, beautiful, artistic and a wonderful joy to read. Emotions tenderly expressed with stunning imagery. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/29/2018 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Susan. Your thoughts are appreciated. I am so happy that you enjoyed this. ~ Brandy
Date: 6/18/2018 7:56:00 AM
Ahh you have painted a beautiful picture with your beautiful words, it sure was a joy to read
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/18/2018 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Faraz. I am happy that you enjoyed this poem. Your kindness is appreciated. :) Maia
Date: 6/16/2018 9:01:00 AM
Again a lovely piece.You are inspiring and one to be admired.
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Date: 6/16/2018 12:52:00 PM
I am happy that you enjoyed this poem. Thank you SYLVIA for your kindness. ~ Maia
Date: 6/15/2018 9:44:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you painted with your words - awesome imagery and show of emotions! Well done my friend and please continue to write and share these beauties. Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/15/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Pandita. Such a wonderful thing to say. :) Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Maia
Date: 6/15/2018 4:27:00 AM
This is a tender poem with your calming words and romantic ideas. Your caring side is on full display here. A great job indeed.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/15/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thank you James. :) It is very kind of you to stop by and read my poetic thoughts. ~ Maia
Date: 6/14/2018 10:54:00 PM
A wonderful cinquain, Maia. I like your style of writing. A pleasure to read. T.J
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/14/2018 11:05:00 PM
You and your kind words are appreciated. Thank you T.J. for your support. ~ Maia