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understanding the risk unless want to get wet, used mother's possession utterly beautiful! underneath stayed so warm, umpteen fun enjoying unending raindrops pour. May 1, 2021 For "Pleiades U" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Six syllables in each line - checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2021 4:47:00 AM

Ahh!! Unique way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/18/2021 5:42:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Appreciate your sweet comment.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/5/2021 8:15:00 AM

Your poem is utterly beautiful my friend... What a lovely picture... Congrats on your win Mala... Hugs... ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/18/2021 5:42:00 AM

Thanks, Anitha. Delighted to know you enjoyed.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 7:31:00 PM

Your Pleiades painted a delightful picture, Mala! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/5/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Enjoyed taking part in your contest.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/4/2021 12:48:00 PM

It's a Beautiful Poem!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/5/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, Dear Poet, for dropping by. Appreciate.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:45:00 PM

a beautiful poem and the picture is charming, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/3/2021 6:40:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Glad you liked the short poem. Appreciate your beautiful comments. I am really enjoying adding lovely pictures to my poems. Blessings ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/3/2021 10:43:00 AM

Having grown up in the northwest, I so relate to the fun of the experience with a good umbrella! Congratulations on your whimsical win my friend! Umbrellas truly are moments of whimsy! Blessings dear friend!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/3/2021 6:39:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. Growing up in India, I had fun too, getting wet, and needing a lovely umbrella. Love ~ Mala

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2021 3:44:00 PM

You have done really well with this tricky letter, Mala! Good luck in the contest. Regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/2/2021 5:02:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Yes, this was definitely tricky.

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/1/2021 2:53:00 PM

Oh so cute!! How did you come up with this lovely thought for a Pleiades? Keep coming!A sure win!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/1/2021 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Dear friend. Letter U was really hard to work with! Can’t wait to see yours! Love -~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/1/2021 12:46:00 PM

Hello Mala, I like to walk in the rain without the umbrella, To get wet with the raindrops. Does not bother me. But if it is thunder and lightening , that is different. Love & zn hugs. Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/1/2021 6:08:00 PM

Darlene, I love rain - and so I love pretty umbrellas! Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/1/2021 3:44:00 PM

Hello Mala, when it is raining and people are running to be indoors, I take my time and enjoy the downpour of the rain. I have always been this way love & Friendshio Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/1/2021 3:00:00 PM

Darlene, my friend, you are so romantic! I like to get wet too! I grew up in India where it rains a lot! Love ~ Mala