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Into the mouth of a mountain's darkness, the past is fading away, still clinging to the sun - - - - - - - - - - - 3/15/15 For Deb's "Derelict Beauty" Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:45:00 PM

Nice win Carrie

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2015 11:05:00 PM

CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2015 11:32:00 AM

I love this beauty, Carrie; excellent 'burden' sharing by each line. A worthy Kimo which is very deserving to be on the winner's list...congratulations! // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/17/2015 8:06:00 PM

I love the imagery and the thoughts your words inspire, Carrie. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2015 6:05:00 PM

I loved this one Carrie many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 3/16/2015 2:47:00 PM

Carrie, oh gosh that's a beautiful poem to accompany that amazing picture, well done and thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem, I write poems . . .

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/15/2015 7:41:00 PM

Yup, yup, YES!!! Light & Love

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2015 5:24:00 PM

wonderful image and imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx