Get Your Premium Membership

Ubiquitous Deathlike White

The harsh season of winter has its grip upon the land. Strong gusty winds are blowing, exacerbating the cold. Precipitation is snow. Tons of solid crystals fall. They lie on the hardened ground. Lakes and streams are not flowing Trees are devoid of their leaves. The ice hangs like stalactites. Green growth is inhibited. No flowers found anywhere. Barren lifeless surroundings. Ubiquitous deathlike white. Come in from out of the freeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/13/2011 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Robert
Login to Reply
Date: 2/10/2011 10:03:00 AM
You paint winter here very well, Robert-- can almost feel that chill--- really like your title for this one too-- wish you the best if this is for the contest :) -- nikko :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/10/2011 9:11:00 AM
i'm dreading the protracted visit of this season... but your piece shimmers and overtakes the blahhh of winter.. majestic, robert!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/10/2011 8:06:00 AM
Very descriptive and describes exactly the weather here today. Came down to -18C today and supposed to hit 0 tomorrow. It will feel like spring. phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 2/10/2011 6:47:00 AM
Excellent descriptive, expressive and inviting work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs