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Typhoon From Rangoon

TYPHOON FROM RANGOON

A lazy typhoon from Rangoon
Ravaged  the seas in a balloon

He scuttled a ship
But let the cord slip

And had to relieve himself on the moon

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March 13, 2010 at 8:08 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. What a day brightener. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Karen

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 4, 2010 at 6:38 PM

Interesting and fun to read. Congrats, Tom, on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Susan Palli

March 3, 2010 at 12:04 PM

so cute!

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 2, 2010 at 10:51 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Thomas. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2010 at 10:29 PM

Verrrrry interesting! cogratulations to you, Thomas. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

March 1, 2010 at 11:06 AM

Congratulations on a funny one. Love, joyce

Doris Culverhouse

March 1, 2010 at 5:46 AM

congrats on the win!! different I like it!

James Fraser

March 1, 2010 at 3:46 AM

Kool Limerick Thomas, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 1, 2010 at 12:19 AM

It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Tom, you swam to the top of the pond with your winning placement in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick contest. I knew this one was cute and funny! (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Iolanda Scripca

February 28, 2010 at 8:15 PM

Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 28, 2010 at 6:43 PM

Congrats Thomas on your winning poem in the Limerick contest.. a funny and amusing write and a wonderful win to enjoy.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

February 28, 2010 at 6:18 PM

Congratulations on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 27, 2010 at 1:54 PM

Funny!!! Thomas. You are loaded with talent. Keep the words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann (Soup Mail.)

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

February 26, 2010 at 2:39 PM

teally fast and fun limmerick my friend always good to read something to have a laugh good job and welcome to poetry soup

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 26, 2010 at 8:04 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us I enjoyed reading it today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Thomas. Love the humor. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

February 26, 2010 at 6:40 AM

Hi, Thomas. Welcome to the soup. Great limerick. Love, daver

John Freeman

February 25, 2010 at 4:44 PM

Nice rhymes Thomas. Welcome to soup. You will meet a lot of nice people here. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 25, 2010 at 4:37 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets Thomas... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ...as this delight tonight... a sweet Limerick..hope u enter it in Carolyn's new contest posted.. could mean a trip to the winners circle.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Barbara Gorelick

February 25, 2010 at 3:56 PM

;Made me laugh...And they say there is no "water" on the moon. Welcome to the Soup.BG

February 25, 2010 at 3:01 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one. I hope you entered this in Carolyn's contest. Enjoyed it. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Keep on writing! Karen