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Two Toned Shoes

With my new shoes, I walk down the street.
You must admit that this pair looks neat.
They’re great together
in two toned leather
However, they are killing my feet.

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Robin Davis

Date: 2/4/2014 4:43:00 PM

Robert Such a silly and creative write. Puts a smile on my face from the humor and fun. Thanks for the great comment on my Long Lost Friends poem

Robert Pettit
Date: 2/4/2014 7:28:00 PM

Robin, thank you again for reviewing my older material. Glad you liked this write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:30:00 PM

ROBERT..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/7/2011 8:38:00 AM

Congrats, Bob. Excellent write. Nice going. All the best. Ralph

Skat A

Date: 11/6/2011 10:38:00 PM

ROBERT~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 12:33:00 PM

How about soaking your tootsies in epsom salts tonight??

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 2/5/2011 11:02:00 AM

So kewl terrific read and no they were not pumps HAHA.Good luck with the contest.Thanks for your kind comments.~Teresa~

George Aul

Date: 2/5/2011 10:10:00 AM

We all know that feeling well. Great thought......Thanks for the comment.......George

Elaine George

Date: 2/4/2011 5:34:00 PM

Good one, Robert. Thanks for your comment on mine - however, it is totally fictional. lol. Lainie

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/4/2011 3:58:00 PM

so very cute and well written,,this should do well,,all the best in the contest,and Thank You for the message for correction,,I sincerely write too fast at times,,Thank You again for your visit to my words and your words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 3:28:00 PM

I know the feeling Robert and leather is my thing luv.. the smell drives me crazy .. it is so awesome like your contest entry.. good luck my friend and happy weekend..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/4/2011 2:57:00 PM

Great entry and a sure a winner... well done my friend

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 2:09:00 PM

Oh yeah, this is a winner with the ladies, Robert! Great limerick, my friend. I wear special shoes for a foot problem, but I remember the calouses, blisters and even bleeding that came from uncomfortable shoes. Way to go! Rock on, Robert. Love, Carolyn