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Two Toned Shoes

With my new shoes, I walk down the street. You must admit that this pair looks neat. They’re great together in two toned leather However, they are killing my feet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2014 4:43:00 PM
Robert Such a silly and creative write. Puts a smile on my face from the humor and fun. Thanks for the great comment on my Long Lost Friends poem
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:28:00 PM
Robin, thank you again for reviewing my older material. Glad you liked this write.
Date: 11/7/2011 10:30:00 PM
ROBERT..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
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Date: 11/7/2011 8:38:00 AM
Congrats, Bob. Excellent write. Nice going. All the best. Ralph
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:38:00 PM
ROBERT~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
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Date: 2/8/2011 12:33:00 PM
How about soaking your tootsies in epsom salts tonight??
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Date: 2/5/2011 11:02:00 AM
So kewl terrific read and no they were not pumps HAHA.Good luck with the contest.Thanks for your kind comments.~Teresa~
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:10:00 AM
We all know that feeling well. Great thought......Thanks for the comment.......George
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:34:00 PM
Good one, Robert. Thanks for your comment on mine - however, it is totally fictional. lol. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 3:58:00 PM
so very cute and well written,,this should do well,,all the best in the contest,and Thank You for the message for correction,,I sincerely write too fast at times,,Thank You again for your visit to my words and your words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/4/2011 3:28:00 PM
I know the feeling Robert and leather is my thing luv.. the smell drives me crazy .. it is so awesome like your contest entry.. good luck my friend and happy weekend..luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 2:57:00 PM
Great entry and a sure a winner... well done my friend
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Date: 2/4/2011 2:09:00 PM
Oh yeah, this is a winner with the ladies, Robert! Great limerick, my friend. I wear special shoes for a foot problem, but I remember the calouses, blisters and even bleeding that came from uncomfortable shoes. Way to go! Rock on, Robert. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:41:00 PM
We ladies hear YOU! Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:09:00 AM
Lol.. thanks for the smile.. good luck in the contest...p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:53:00 AM
may kind of gag, robert.. best of winning streaks to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:18:00 AM
funny limerick, good luck in the contest
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