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Two To Tangle

Two To Tangle -Dinda Minardi TWO STRENGTHS (( COLLABORATION )) by~ Dinda Minardi Do you still remember how we played around? Mocking each other over our guys We were princesses in our parents’ lawn Bonded by our laughs and cries When family downtime crawled We hold each other as we’re the older Our maturity has been boiled Ready to serves as a breaker We are one and stronger Always love and respect for you, sister To struggle with you, is all I willingly to do When you give up, I’ll be your whip As you‘re a jolt if spirit’s asleep by~ Poet Destroyer I could never forget the way we played around. Yes! We played patty cake to showoff in front of boys. We built a white castle than, brother tore it down. You were never afraid to show how much you care, Especially when we played tag, and you never played fair. Now your heart is filled with greater love. Your like an angel that fell from above. Your invisible wings protect me in every fall, When we where small you protected me from nightmares. I secretly enjoyed the way you pushed me around. You held your head up high, and never let me down. Our fights where silly ways of building a better bond. My stubbornness came from trying to be just like you. Now "the strength of me", Comes from "the strength of you." A collaboration with * Dinda Minardi my collaboration contest

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Date: 12/11/2011 3:37:00 PM
* "I LOVE WONDERFUL COLLABORATION FORMED AMID THE VISIONS IN LUV * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL DINDA * YOUR LOVELY BEAUTIES PAINTED MIRRORED REFLECTION OF COUNTLESS SIBLINGS ACROSS TIMES STAGES * BLOOD OF MY BLOOD & BONE OF MY BONES * LOVE THE FACT THAT YOU BOTH ALSO EXPOSE THE TRUTH FOUND AMID FLESHES FRAILTIES IN THAT * WE FALL SHORT OF THE THINGS WE OFTEN DREAM & LUV * I FIND MYSELF STANDING UPON A SHORE WITHIN MY MINDS EYE * GAZING SERENELY ACROSS THE ROLLING TIDES OF TIME * SPIRIT OF MY SPIRIT * LOVE OF MY LUV * HAPPY HOLIDAYS UNTO YOU BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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Date: 9/21/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Dinda
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congrats on a piece that I knew would be on top... written by two wonderful ladies... with love Michael
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR
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Date: 9/16/2011 9:17:00 PM
she touched you. and i know it. we all had childhood friends. mine was my cousin, who cried everytime we left town. i'd write about it but someone already has. john
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:09:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work with this gifted write..P.D. did a nice work with you..Sara
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Date: 9/16/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! how awesome! and a nice tribute to sisters :)
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Date: 9/16/2011 10:32:00 AM
Well done and most enjoyable, a wonderful way to start my day. Congratulations on this great composition. Lee
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:13:00 AM
Love it!! - The Wizard
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Date: 9/16/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Dinda on a first place win with your collab with PD.. awesome and magnificent piece luv.. enjoy ..enjoy...
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:21:00 AM
DINDA, CONGRATULATIONS ON OUR #1 collab... I thought It was going to be a tough contest to judge... lol... nope not at all.... i knew i fell in love with this poem..the moment i thought of my younger sister~. it was the most touching out of all... thank you for the collaboration..always,..LINDA
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:59:00 PM
Very nice collaborations with PD here. I think you both did great!
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:39:00 PM
Just great Dinda, You and Linda did a super job with your verse. I find these collaborations so interesting.
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:41:00 PM
Just wonderful a fantastic write by both of you, best of luck in the contest and thanks so much for reading my poetry, I so appreciate that~~
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:56:00 PM
Very nice collab by you two fine Poets and Ladies.... so enjoyed... luv Michael
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