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Thought I'd give this form a go! I followed the rules, structure, but missed the mark on clever or witty. I'll keep trying! ;) xoxo Than-Bauks: 3 lines, 4 syllables each line, with the rhyme on the first line, fourth syllable, 2nd line, third syllable, 3rd line, second syllable.
Flea Market Find What can this be Let us see if This key will work Daily Grace God is the light In His might He Turns night to day

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Date: 9/4/2024 5:40:00 PM
This is not an easy form, I think I tried it a couple times, Nicely done
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/5/2024 9:11:00 AM
Tysm! I really want to try for the clever or witty aspect common with this form. I'll have to check yours out! Xo
Date: 9/4/2024 10:54:00 AM
Very nice! Love both of them! Well done.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/5/2024 9:12:00 AM
Ty Kim! What a pleasure to hear from you today! Xo

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