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Two Silly Fools

Two Silly Fools (at the coffee shop)


The shop was full
Only one seat to spare
Excuse me sirs, can I have a chair?
Why yes they said, smiles filled the air

They happened to be poets the same as me
Politely I asked, may I read a verse of thee?
They both rather meekly said
"If you really insist"

One said to me in such a small whisper
My poetry is not at all very good
As much as I wish it could and should
The other chimed in, is the same with me

I stared in surprise
Have I just met two of the dumbest fools?
I exclaimed in a manner rather short and abrupt
"You are the greatest fools I ever did see"

Rather shocked, they pushed back their chairs
I shouted sit; I am not done with my airs
You two fools better be quiet and listen
Cause I will say this but once, so I have written

Your poetry is of the highest caliber you see
You have the flow and the creative imagery
Darren and Rick need I say more?
Your hearts bleed poetry, is deep in your pores

Your poetry wakens the spirit in us all
If you want more you sure have some gall
Now writing as this, I wish it was me
For I look up to poets of such high degree

Now if I must tell you a truth to be told
Is me the fool, for being so bold
So now let’s sit and make if coffee for three
Of the happiest fools and great poets that be!


Notes:  This was inspired by a chat I had with both Darren and White Wolf who for some bizarre and strange reason both doubted their talents and abilities as Poets. Needless to say, I gave them a word or two on getting those silly thoughts out of their heads! I find both of their poems to be diversified, well written, inspiring, contemplative and at times just plain fun to read. After all, it’s the read who is the final judge. I sincerely hope I have made them both smile!
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Allison Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:12 PM
what a wonderful tribute to Darren and Rick and of course kudos to you Arthur for your exceptional skills in both poetry and the website:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on POTD, Arthur Hugs ~`*
Downing  Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Congrats on your amazing POTD Arthur and yes all yous are amazing poets... hugs :)
Smith Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 1:34 PM
More than just a number... Congratulations
B. Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Arthur, So deserving and I am happy to see that you received poem of the day! Wonderful tribute for Darren and White Wolf. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Ah, a bold and great friend indeed. A kick to the rear and a chair for these..lol! And congrats on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:25 PM
- Arthur ... it's so much beautiful to find "behind your curtains" ... I've stayed here for almost an hour ... and just enjoy everything - Congratulations on your amazingly uplifting p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Oh, Only now see it's PotD <3
White Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:01 PM
LOL, love it so much Art, including the pictures you chose for the poem :D SO wonderfully written my friend, You made me smile, more than smile!!!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Wonderfully worded, Arthur! Absolutely awesome poem. Kudos for POTD on this cool and humorous tribute to Rick and Darren, two uber talented poets. Love and peace.
Daniel Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:55 AM
A great tribute to Darren and Rick, Arthur, which they do deserve very much:) congratulations on your POTD:)
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD...Cool fools lol...glad you woke them up, Arthur...nicely penned my friend...enjoyed all the way...god bless...^WW^
Wood Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Hear hear! I totally agree! I have learned a lot from Darren and the White Wolf. Always willing to help, comment, and encourage. Thank you all!
Marine Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:44 AM
I just had to comment here, to say bravo! What a pleasure to read this poem, and know that Darren and Whife Wolf have the encouragement they needed...in full accord with all it, myself. Congratulations on potd- well deserved, Arthur!
Y. Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Hi Arthur, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis
Vaso Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Thanks Alexis!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Word up! Talent abounds :) xomo! Lovely potd to greet me this morning Arthur, congrats! xomo
Vaso Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, was a fun one to write!
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:41 AM
congratulations on achieving POTD Arthur, love your poem and if I was a fraction as good as Darren, Rick and yourself I would be a happy man, well written. :))
Vaso Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thanks Roy, much appreciated!
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Hi Arthur, All four of you are AMAZING POETS. I really enjoyed this piece. It has You all over it! Excellent job and tribute:-) Alexis
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:49 PM
ok thats 7 and counting!!!!! :)
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Hahaha... I love this, Art! Very artfully done! See you in the cafe
Wanter Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:37 PM
I stumbled across this poem by the Giant! Love it.
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Six and counting!!!!! :)
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Four of the most amazing poets I know and counting , Tim, Arthur, Darren, and Rick... Wonderful tribute, Arthur.. Hugs ~`*
Roper Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:47 PM
:)
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Five and counting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Smith Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Three wonderful poets...amazing tribute
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:20 PM
You fool..... 4 and counting!!!!!
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