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Two Silly Fools (at the coffee shop) The shop was full Only one seat to spare Excuse me sirs, can I have a chair? Why yes they said, smiles filled the air They happened to be poets the same as me Politely I asked, may I read a verse of thee? They both rather meekly said "If you really insist" One said to me in such a small whisper My poetry is not at all very good As much as I wish it could and should The other chimed in, is the same with me I stared in surprise Have I just met two of the dumbest fools? I exclaimed in a manner rather short and abrupt "You are the greatest fools I ever did see" Rather shocked, they pushed back their chairs I shouted sit; I am not done with my airs You two fools better be quiet and listen Cause I will say this but once, so I have written Your poetry is of the highest caliber you see You have the flow and the creative imagery Darren and Rick need I say more? Your hearts bleed poetry, is deep in your pores Your poetry wakens the spirit in us all If you want more you sure have some gall Now writing as this, I wish it was me For I look up to poets of such high degree Now if I must tell you a truth to be told Is me the fool, for being so bold So now let’s sit and make if coffee for three Of the happiest fools and great poets that be! Notes: This was inspired by a chat I had with both Darren and White Wolf who for some bizarre and strange reason both doubted their talents and abilities as Poets. Needless to say, I gave them a word or two on getting those silly thoughts out of their heads! I find both of their poems to be diversified, well written, inspiring, contemplative and at times just plain fun to read. After all, it’s the read who is the final judge. I sincerely hope I have made them both smile!

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Date: 9/12/2017 6:12:00 PM
what a wonderful tribute to Darren and Rick and of course kudos to you Arthur for your exceptional skills in both poetry and the website:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/5/2017 6:40:00 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on POTD, Arthur Hugs ~`*
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Date: 9/5/2017 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing POTD Arthur and yes all yous are amazing poets... hugs :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 1:34:00 PM
More than just a number... Congratulations
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Date: 9/5/2017 1:01:00 PM
Arthur, So deserving and I am happy to see that you received poem of the day! Wonderful tribute for Darren and White Wolf. :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 12:59:00 PM
Ah, a bold and great friend indeed. A kick to the rear and a chair for these..lol! And congrats on POTD!
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Date: 9/5/2017 12:25:00 PM
- Arthur ... it's so much beautiful to find "behind your curtains" ... I've stayed here for almost an hour ... and just enjoy everything - Congratulations on your amazingly uplifting p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 12:08:00 PM
Oh, Only now see it's PotD <3
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Date: 9/5/2017 12:01:00 PM
LOL, love it so much Art, including the pictures you chose for the poem :D SO wonderfully written my friend, You made me smile, more than smile!!!
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Date: 9/5/2017 11:17:00 AM
Wonderfully worded, Arthur! Absolutely awesome poem. Kudos for POTD on this cool and humorous tribute to Rick and Darren, two uber talented poets. Love and peace.
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Date: 9/5/2017 9:55:00 AM
A great tribute to Darren and Rick, Arthur, which they do deserve very much:) congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 9/5/2017 8:57:00 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD...Cool fools lol...glad you woke them up, Arthur...nicely penned my friend...enjoyed all the way...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/5/2017 8:44:00 AM
Hear hear! I totally agree! I have learned a lot from Darren and the White Wolf. Always willing to help, comment, and encourage. Thank you all!
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Date: 9/5/2017 7:44:00 AM
I just had to comment here, to say bravo! What a pleasure to read this poem, and know that Darren and Whife Wolf have the encouragement they needed...in full accord with all it, myself. Congratulations on potd- well deserved, Arthur!
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Date: 9/5/2017 7:25:00 AM
Hi Arthur, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/5/2017 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Alexis!!!
Date: 9/5/2017 6:49:00 AM
Word up! Talent abounds :) xomo! Lovely potd to greet me this morning Arthur, congrats! xomo
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/5/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, was a fun one to write!
Date: 9/5/2017 6:41:00 AM
congratulations on achieving POTD Arthur, love your poem and if I was a fraction as good as Darren, Rick and yourself I would be a happy man, well written. :))
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/5/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Roy, much appreciated!
Date: 9/4/2017 7:42:00 PM
Hi Arthur, All four of you are AMAZING POETS. I really enjoyed this piece. It has You all over it! Excellent job and tribute:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2017 7:49:00 PM
ok thats 7 and counting!!!!! :)
Date: 9/4/2017 6:48:00 PM
Hahaha... I love this, Art! Very artfully done! See you in the cafe
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Date: 9/4/2017 6:37:00 PM
I stumbled across this poem by the Giant! Love it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2017 6:40:00 PM
Six and counting!!!!! :)
Date: 9/4/2017 6:15:00 PM
Four of the most amazing poets I know and counting , Tim, Arthur, Darren, and Rick... Wonderful tribute, Arthur.. Hugs ~`*
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 6:47:00 PM
:)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2017 6:22:00 PM
Five and counting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 9/4/2017 5:18:00 PM
Three wonderful poets...amazing tribute
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/4/2017 5:20:00 PM
You fool..... 4 and counting!!!!!

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