Two Ships Did Arrive

Into our harbour
Two ships did sail
From foreign lands
Through storms and gales

These bringers of new
From far distant places
With their spices and silks
And their different faces

Most welcome they are
To our harbour walls they approach
To respect our laws
And not to encroach

Once on our lands
They can do as we do
But to misrepresent themselves
We shall see them through

Off their ships they embark
On my lands they now stand
Absorbing the greenery and grandeur
My island of grand

Our children and women
To the harbour they head
Two ships have arrived
Many people have said

For they know there will be
Many things that are new
As they barter their wares
To these foreigners few

Days will pass
And these ships will depart
On a new journey they will head
To another place so apart

Where am i
You are asking yourselves
I am on a place called Atlantis
Near the Atlantic shelf




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Date: 11/29/2009 9:44:00 PM
James, in reading this, I am transported to that harbor! Great imagery, great flow and rhyme! Have a good week! Peace,love, Audrey
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Date: 11/27/2009 10:13:00 AM
Great fantasy here in this one. What is the name of that place that someone or ones or corporate powers are building by dredging sand to build an island or islands the shape of a palm tree, I thinkg palm. Are they calling it Atlantis? Good Rhyme and rhythm. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:46:00 PM
James, this is wonderful.. Im sure Carolyn will love it as well. Happy Day! BG
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:09:00 PM
Interesting write! Well written quatrain. You are obviously fascinated by history. Indeed there is much to learn in history and perhaps if we really did, we might not repeat its many mistakes. Thanks for sharing James. Great work of the pen! Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 11/26/2009 12:02:00 PM
Quite interesting.. is this from reading Carolyn's book? I just received it in yesterday's mail and will try to start this weekend to get inside her words... luv this poem as the others from your creative pen today... turkey day gave u lots of insight to write... and for us to enjoy... and I did.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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