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Two raindrops

Plop, plop, Two drops from rain clouds fall, How varied their thoughts, I recall, Both fall upon parched dust, One feels, oh my life’s all but bust. The other feels rosy indeed— I’d fertilize a seed That would grow to be tall, Look at my potential! … … Plumb, plumb, Of two drops that fall in the sea, One feels, ‘I’ve lost identity’, It despairs lost in sea, The other, ‘I’ve now become sea, And marvels at its potentiality. To her chicks tells a chirpy bird, What she’d ere from her mother heard. ___________________________________ Free verse |15.06.2024| raindrops

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Date: 7/16/2024 1:15:00 PM
Congrats! Great contrast! Love the end too!
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Date: 7/16/2024 12:16:00 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN. BEAUTIFUL POEM.
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:10:00 PM
the sound of rain accompanied by great images make this write a winner...congrats
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Date: 7/14/2024 9:59:00 PM
A unique writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:48:00 PM
glass half full or half empty situation. wonderful thinking. Beautiful poem Congratulations dear poet. happy writing
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:12:00 AM
Great poem. Very creative. Congrats.
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Date: 7/14/2024 9:14:00 AM
Oh I love this... what potential one drop of rain has but depending on how you look at your life...I love a poem with a good moral! Xo
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:46:00 AM
Excellent to read. CONGRATS Blessings.
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