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Two Predators

A world within a world Beneath the deep blue sea, Diverse ecosystems. God organized a mystery. An ocean of stored water, Recycles through the air. Worlds apart, together, Thriving without a care. Rain to drop upon the earth, As man and fish survive. Evaporates, falls fresh again. All glad to be alive. Amid the food chain life goes on. Automatically – The natural world where life did spawn, Continues genetically. Eons passed, extinctions came. Mankind thrived, explored. Face to face, though not the same. Two predators watch…in accord. © May 25, 2011

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John Freeman

Date: 6/5/2011 7:29:00 AM

Dane, great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your great entry. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2011 5:50:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Carolyn's wonderful contest :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/4/2011 12:23:00 PM

Both an intresting and winning piece Dane-anne, congratulations on the win!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/4/2011 11:29:00 AM

Congrats... hope all is well with you...BG

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/3/2011 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations to you Dane Ann on this fine win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 3:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carolyn, Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 6/3/2011 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest Dane Ann. Love Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 6/3/2011 3:35:00 PM

Thank you, Carol. It's always great to read your comments and congratulations. Thank you for your support.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/3/2011 1:34:00 PM

You really put your heart into this thought-provoking write, Dane. Awesome perspective of the "food chain" and the way extinctions come about. Congratulations on your big win! Love you, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 6/3/2011 3:29:00 PM

I am so glad you picked my poem. I know you judged this contest blind. So, it really means a lot to me to have won a 3rd place. Thank you, my dear friend. Love you.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/3/2011 1:24:00 PM

Well done take on the contest and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 6/3/2011 3:32:00 PM

Thank you, Joyce. I was so happy to have been picked. As you and many others know, Carolyn is such a good friend of mine and to have had her select my poem while judging blind made me feel wonderful! I think this is the highest I've ever ranked in one of her contests before. (Thanks again, Carolyn.)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 1:55:00 PM

Wishing you the best in the contest if this is for Carolyn's contest. It is amazing Dane Ann. Love and blessings always, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 5/25/2011 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, Carol for your kind comment.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/25/2011 1:48:00 PM

deep intense write .. good luck if for any contest Dane Ann... luv the predator aspect my friend..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 5/25/2011 2:09:00 PM

Thank you, Linda Marie, for your kind comment and well wishes for the contest. I am glad you enjoyed the predator aspect. Big Smiles.