Viv Wigley Poet Rhyme

Two Pair of Shoes

Limping Jack bragged that he owned two pairs of shoes,
though many people do,so no surprises,
but he stole them from a shop and never knew
that those out on display were different sizes.

For contest 'Two pair of shoes', sponsor John Lawless

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Jean Murray August 9, 2017 at 6:13 PM I love that you are at the end of my list Viv. Not "He who laughs lasts" but "She who laughs at the last." Thank you as always.

Sunita U.D Palawon August 8, 2017 at 2:32 AM Poor man! :D you do have a talent in bringing humor. Thanks for sharing this. Congrats!! Regs Sunita

Lewis Raynes August 7, 2017 at 11:10 PM Bahahaha, a great little laugh with this one, didn't see the ending coming at all, congratulations Viv.

Connie Marcum Wong August 7, 2017 at 7:20 PM I really loved your entry Viv. I'm so happy to see it made the list. Congratulations! : )

Susan Ashley August 7, 2017 at 7:15 PM Hi Viv, I so enjoyed your write. Congrats on your placement :)

Eve Roper August 7, 2017 at 6:55 PM love this poem, Viv, congratulations on your win... ~*

Rob Carmack August 7, 2017 at 6:33 PM LOL & congrats on your win.

Jan Allison August 7, 2017 at 4:48 PM ha ha ha love the humour many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Dean Wood August 7, 2017 at 3:49 PM LOL, hehe Wouldn't you know it! That would be just my luck! Congratulations Viv.

Lin Lane August 7, 2017 at 3:14 PM I love the humor of this one, Viv. Nicely done.

John Lawless August 7, 2017 at 1:50 PM Hell, Viv, the pair I took were different colors too.....nice take on the theme...thanks for the chuckle

Connie Marcum Wong August 6, 2017 at 7:38 AM Karma got him! A great entry Viv! ; )

Eileen Manassian August 6, 2017 at 3:45 AM HA HA! Serves him right! Good one, Viv. Long time no hear. Hope all is well.

Joseph May August 6, 2017 at 2:56 AM lol..thanks for the chuckles