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Two Mourning Doves

fat mourning doves sit fluffed facing the winter wind... plate emptied of bread

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Linda Jackson

Date: 3/8/2014 2:28:00 PM

Lovely Haiku. Best wishes Linda

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/8/2014 8:57:00 AM

God bless the tender creatures. Peace. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2014 10:32:00 PM

LOVE it!! The fluffed word was awesome.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/7/2014 2:43:00 PM

awww, poor things. I see this one so clearly, Sara

Vincent Flannery

Date: 3/6/2014 2:32:00 PM

Oh the beauty in God's many gifts. Such a blessing to be able to appreciate His great work. Such feeling so many of His creatures have just in their eyes. I believe only humans have a white in our eye. Take care Sara and God Bless.

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/6/2014 11:10:00 AM

A nice observation described here Sara..

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/5/2014 10:48:00 PM

Ah yes, the morning doves, I love their calls, my favorite call of any bird! Do you remember their distinct "Hooting" call? I'm sure you do, as you probably placed that plate of bread out for them! I really enjoyed reading this delightful write here this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Skat A

Date: 3/5/2014 10:30:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Sara,......SKAT

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/5/2014 6:47:00 PM

The birds do seem to eat up their food so quickly, and it seems like we are always going outside to refill the bird feeder. I enjoyed this humorous poem, Sara! Well done!...Thank you so much for the kind birthday wishes! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2014 4:16:00 PM

i like the ahha line, sara... fat dove empties plate.. great one.. thanks for yor feedback via soupie.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2014 1:36:00 PM

- Beautiful haiku, Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2014 9:49:00 AM

very good...though somewhat sad