Two Missing Pieces

My mom kept all her grandkids one summer
To visit a week or two

Wouldn't ya know it, it started to rain
Stuck inside with nothing to do

The older ones started a puzzle so grand
With every animal found at the zoo

When young Zach tried to help, they only shoved him away
On how to get even he quietly started to stew

I pretended to read my magazine while this was going on
But watched as Zach stuck in his pocket - pieces numbering two

For days and days the puzzle grew
And we all anxiously awaited the final view

Then disappointed faces all around
Searching the whole house through and through

Then Zach walked up with his crooked smile
Finished the puzzle and whistling, from the room withdrew

©Donna Jones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Timperley Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 6:56 AM
OOOH I love Zach! Sometimes, when it does no hurt, vengence is sooo sweet!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Your very own Dennis the Menace. This was a lot of fun, simply marvelous.
Jones Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 8:31 PM
Yes and I hope he always stays that way...thanks Richard...
Ellison Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Oh love this guy Zach! Cool dude! Something I would not be averse to doing! Great rhyming scheme! You're a good one, Miss Muffet! Love and monster hugs, Jack xox
Jones Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 8:29 PM
Yes he is and I hope he always stays that way...thanks Richard...
Jones Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 5:09 PM
Yes he is quite a card and still is at 21...thanks Jack...
Ryerson Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 7:12 PM
Now this is really cool and funny stuff, Donna!...The last verse is priceless...reads like a comedy sitcom or something similar...You go girl! - Tim
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Well Zach has kept us in stitches 21 years and counting. Thanks for stopping Tim.
Ryerson Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 7:15 PM
And I just realized the last line of each verse rhymes...Mercy me, Donna
A   Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 12:25 PM
Donna, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Thanks Linda ...he's a card!
Ellison Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 2:06 PM
I notice you have been getting a great response to your poetry... didn't I tell you! LOL Gotta love that guy Zach! Loved it... and you! xox
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Hi Jack...yeah just one of my great nephews. Thanks for reading...
Mason Gibbs Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Good work Donna, congrats :)
Jones Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 9:23 PM
Thanks so much :-)
Johnson Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Good for Zack. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Thanks Joyce...appreciate your visit
Jerden Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Loved the way you kept the mystery in, Donna! Congratulations on a great win!
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:33 PM
Thanks Roy , Zach is still quite a character at 21
Seal Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Lol Donna, this made me laugh, my sister and I would do this just so we could be the ones to finish the puzzle. Congratulations in the contest, very inventive write. Thanks for your comments on mine. Take care, Regards Richard
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Thanks Richard....Zach is quite a young man..21 Now and still the life of the party....appreciate the comments...Donna
Guzzi Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 2:38 PM
Hmmm quite a mischievous child! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Thanks debbie
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Donna I really love your poem. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Really appreciate it Connie....:-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Oh that last piece must be placed and what way to do it ... congratulations Donna xx
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Yes...he thought so...you should have seen the look on their faces!!!! Priceless. We still laugh about it
May Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 9:32 AM
congrats on your win Donna
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 3:47 PM
Thanks so much Joseph :-)
Hunter Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Ha...very nice, Donna. Congrats!
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Lil stinker.....he has kept us laughing 21 years so far now....
Horsman Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 11:21 AM
what a wonderful and enlightening poem, Donna
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Thanks Harry, a wonderful kid now a wonderful man!
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 8:48 AM
He's a boy for my taste....lol.. - A very good poem Donna. - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Yes he's quite a young man now, never met a stranger and everyone loves him. Thanks for stopping to read my poem.. Donna
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Donna a delightful poem. Smart little guy. Warm Smiles, Connie
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Yes he is...always been a thinker this one.....and a doer...world watch out!!!!! Thanks Connie
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 1:37 AM
GOOD ONE ZACK! ATTA BOY! ;) Lovely poem! Hugs!
Jones Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 8:12 AM
My thoughts exactly when I saw what he was up to...he didn't cry or fight with them.....just quietly knew he would get the final glory!!!!! Ornery devil.....thanks for stopping by Eileen
Sivey Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 8:53 PM
This is hilarious, quite the special write my friend! I loved reading this delightful tale of childhood fun! I really enjoyed this amazing poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, or two pieces(ha ha), Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Yeah he has always been so ornery. I'm surprised he lived to adulthood, but he is a wonderful man now. Thanks.....Donna
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