Two Hearts Beating As None

When you chase love
Down the alley of despair
Love escapes into the thin cold air
You dance alone, in bewilderment

At your solitude

Then at the blink of an eye
You see her, staring over there
Love struck she seems.... with golden hair
She chases love, as she passes you on by

She is solitary and she wonders why

In her room alone does she cry?
Or is she cold, heartless and chasing diamonds in the skies?
I walk in the gardens of summer’s content
Pondering life, and loves discontent

Would she ever shed a tear for me?

Two hearts beating as none
Two souls combined
In the universe of none

Twenty four plus one reasons to die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 12:17 AM
I love the words in this poem. So many exact scenes you paint with minimal effort. That is what poetry is meant to be.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:39 AM
First stanza..:) heartfelt...:)
Vaso Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:53 PM
:) thanks Olive
Deschler Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:42 AM
I know the feeling of wanting to die, when you care so much for someone and they don't even notice you..... You expressed those deep feelings so well here.... Just go after her heart, Arthur. What have you got to lose?
Vaso Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Ah thanks Kelly, I dont have too she went after mine, just look at the "contest" poem!!!! :)
Smith Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:50 PM
You will never know unless you give it a chance....reach out your hand ask her to dance...start a little romance....the beat might be there behind her golden hair so get off your chair and fly over there....chase your dreams....go Hawks
Vaso Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:51 PM
I think I need to hire you!!
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