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Two Hearts Beating As None

When you chase love Down the alley of despair Love escapes into the thin cold air You dance alone, in bewilderment At your solitude Then at the blink of an eye You see her, staring over there Love struck she seems.... with golden hair She chases love, as she passes you on by She is solitary and she wonders why In her room alone does she cry? Or is she cold, heartless and chasing diamonds in the skies? I walk in the gardens of summer’s content Pondering life, and loves discontent Would she ever shed a tear for me? Two hearts beating as none Two souls combined In the universe of none Twenty four plus one reasons to die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/1/2014 12:17:00 AM
I love the words in this poem. So many exact scenes you paint with minimal effort. That is what poetry is meant to be.
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:39:00 AM
First stanza..:) heartfelt...:)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:53:00 PM
:) thanks Olive
Date: 9/26/2014 1:42:00 AM
I know the feeling of wanting to die, when you care so much for someone and they don't even notice you..... You expressed those deep feelings so well here.... Just go after her heart, Arthur. What have you got to lose?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:52:00 PM
Ah thanks Kelly, I dont have too she went after mine, just look at the "contest" poem!!!! :)
Date: 9/25/2014 10:50:00 PM
You will never know unless you give it a chance....reach out your hand ask her to dance...start a little romance....the beat might be there behind her golden hair so get off your chair and fly over there....chase your dreams....go Hawks
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:51:00 PM
I think I need to hire you!!

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