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Written on February 18, 2024

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Her heart melts… And soundless tears, Spread music in breathless, Smiles, attempting to reveal… What is – to her…. The wonder that feels, The song that stills, The love that heals. His heart beats… For the color of her eyes, Where light reflects, A tender invitation, a sigh, What is – to him… The gift of insight, The joy that delights, The beauty of their life. Together, they linger in the night, Trembling like a shadow, Never hesitant to provide… All the love that two hearts can find, Beneath the silence of the soul who is wise, And welcomes this opportunity to shine!

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Date: 2/18/2024 5:55:00 AM
- So lovely written, Gina :) - hugs
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:44:00 AM
awwww...a soft and romantic poem about two intertwined hearts! I liked this line"beneath the silence the soul is wise." I continued to be awed with your poetic voice and style...you're truly gifted. hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/18/2024 5:03:00 AM
Hi Regina, I like the way you built in pauses in this poem, it adds to the momentum of the piece. It helped me visualize those two trembling hearts.
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