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Two Friends and a Puppy------Childrens Poem Story

This is a children's book I want to get published with some cute colorful pictures. Please let me know what you think and any suggestions. Thanks Crinkle was a little cloud That lived in a fluffy town Full of smiles, joy and laughter Fun times always shared together In the city and park slides The towns love was miles wide Crinkle has a friend named Buddy When it rains they get all muddy Crinkle called Buddy one day To have a picnic and some play They walked into the sunny park When they heard a little bark They listened very carefully And found a puppy near a tree With brown fur and big green eyes The puppy jumped up with surprise Into the arms of little Crinkle The puppies face had cute small dimples The two friends did not know What to do or who to show So they took their new friend home Where she wouldn’t be alone Giving her hugs right from the start To show the love inside their heart For this little fun new friend Never letting good times end Chasing frisbees, sticks and balls And silly shadows on the wall The little puppy looked so fancy The two friends thought and called her Clancy Each day Crinkle and Buddy too Taught Clancy a trick or two Sitting up and rolling over In warm green fields of clover Balancing while jumping up For a toy inside a cup Dancing and prancing around For the people in cloud town Showing off and having fun Until the moon blocks out the sun While Clancy rested in her bed Till the sun woke up again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/22/2014 5:00:00 AM
a delightful story Robin congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 2/20/2014 11:50:00 AM
So cute! I bet you would make a great children's author; you have such a sweet and kind demeanor that I think kids would instantly relate to. This is perfect for that age group. Great job, Sweet Pea <3
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Date: 2/17/2014 2:46:00 AM
this was very sweet. I am sure a small child would enjoy hearing it read to them. With those nice pictures to go along with it!! I sure do wonder how to break into that industry of children books!!
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Date: 2/14/2014 6:50:00 AM
I really enjoyed it...If you wanted to teach a lesson you could add about the person who lost a puppy ...The way you did it was great..just a different take
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Date: 2/13/2014 11:28:00 PM
A darling little write that reminds me of a dog I used to have several years ago.
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