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Two Eyes Contact Two Eyes

Two eyes two male eyes Follow upon my entrance Stare a burning hole Eyes continue follow As take place by window Those married male eyes Face to face desire Older with young woman Eyes meet years pass ...still Contest: "Eyes First Meet" Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico Written by:Sara Kendrick

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James Fraser

Date: 4/13/2011 11:53:00 AM

Many congrats on your win Sara in Michael's contest....:)

Duval Hyppolite

Date: 4/12/2011 12:53:00 PM

you well describe the regrets of all old men.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2011 10:57:00 AM

Hope you're much better now, Sara. Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:33:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations, Sara. slowly going thru things on this laptop with out a mouse.It's making me nuts and I am going to get off soon and get ready for the wedding. It's kind of a grey chilly day.How are things where YOU are?

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 12:27:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your win in MJF's contest ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 7:12:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your win in the contest.Enjoyed your Senryu---kashinath

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 2:03:00 AM

Loved these first time round, so glad you're in the winners circle Sara, congrats. Harry

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:59:00 AM

Lovely string Senryu. Sara. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/2/2011 12:14:00 AM

I really like how you use repetition in some of your words here, Sara-- very effective :) Super congrats on your win :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/1/2011 9:43:00 PM

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Sara.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 6:11:00 PM

Proud that my poem tied with yours. Very nice. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Michael, Sara. How are you?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 3:13:00 PM

lovely, sara.. best CHEERs fpr the fascinating win in this tourney! wow..:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your 8th Place win in Michael's Contest, Sara. Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:43:00 PM

It's great to see your poem in the winners' circle, Sara. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:29:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your wonderful winning poem in Michael's contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten moment with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:28:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your win in my contest...luv MIchael

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/30/2011 6:36:00 AM

good luck Sara, in the contest, just awesome these are.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 11:27:00 AM

Beautiful write Sara!I like it--kashinath

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/27/2011 1:59:00 PM

A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/27/2011 1:10:00 PM

This is quite a delightful entry Sara. Good luck for the contest.. How are you doing?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2011 11:13:00 AM

It seems like his eyes could see right through you as they stared "a burning hole," Sara. A great entry for Michael's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/27/2011 10:52:00 AM

Beautiful expressions on the love at first sight, Sara