Sara Kendrick Poet Senryu

Two Eyes Contact Two Eyes

Two eyes two male eyes
     Follow upon my entrance
Stare a burning hole

Eyes continue follow
     As take place by window
Those married male eyes

Face to face desire
     Older with young woman
Eyes meet years pass ...still

Contest: "Eyes First Meet"
Sponsor: Michael J. Falotico
Written by:Sara Kendrick

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James Fraser April 13, 2011 at 11:53 AM Many congrats on your win Sara in Michael's contest....:)

Duval Hyppolite April 12, 2011 at 12:53 PM you well describe the regrets of all old men.

Jack Horne April 4, 2011 at 10:57 AM Hope you're much better now, Sara. Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 5:42 AM Congratulations on your win Sara in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts April 3, 2011 at 7:33 PM congrats on your win in the contest Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2011 at 2:11 PM Congratulations, Sara. slowly going thru things on this laptop with out a mouse.It's making me nuts and I am going to get off soon and get ready for the wedding. It's kind of a grey chilly day.How are things where YOU are?

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:27 PM Sara, congratulations on your win in MJF's contest ;)

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 7:12 AM Congrats Sara on your win in the contest.Enjoyed your Senryu---kashinath

Harry Horsman April 2, 2011 at 2:03 AM Loved these first time round, so glad you're in the winners circle Sara, congrats. Harry

Elaine George April 2, 2011 at 1:59 AM Lovely string Senryu. Sara. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 2, 2011 at 12:14 AM I really like how you use repetition in some of your words here, Sara-- very effective :) Super congrats on your win :)

Tahera Mannan April 1, 2011 at 9:43 PM Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Sara.

Joyce Johnson April 1, 2011 at 6:11 PM Proud that my poem tied with yours. Very nice. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2011 at 3:20 PM Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Michael, Sara. How are you?

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2011 at 3:13 PM lovely, sara.. best CHEERs fpr the fascinating win in this tourney! wow..:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick April 1, 2011 at 3:02 PM Congratulations on your 8th Place win in Michael's Contest, Sara. Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2011 at 2:43 PM It's great to see your poem in the winners' circle, Sara. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 1, 2011 at 2:29 PM Congrats Sara on your wonderful winning poem in Michael's contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten moment with luv..

Michael J. Falotico April 1, 2011 at 2:28 PM Congrats Sara on your win in my contest...luv MIchael

Harry Horsman March 30, 2011 at 6:36 AM good luck Sara, in the contest, just awesome these are.

Kash Poet March 29, 2011 at 11:27 AM Beautiful write Sara!I like it--kashinath

Caryl Muzzey March 27, 2011 at 1:59 PM A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Wilma Neels March 27, 2011 at 1:10 PM This is quite a delightful entry Sara. Good luck for the contest.. How are you doing?

Carolyn Devonshire March 27, 2011 at 11:13 AM It seems like his eyes could see right through you as they stared "a burning hole," Sara. A great entry for Michael's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta March 27, 2011 at 10:52 AM Beautiful expressions on the love at first sight, Sara

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