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two doves on cold day, eat seed from take out tray... cat stealthly stalks meal

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/16/2016 8:57:00 AM

great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2016 2:57:00 PM

Funom, Thanks for the visit to my page..I could not find a picture of doves so I went with one of a cat stalking out a crow but that cat will come away hungry for that crow is one smart bird.. Sara

Robyn Campbell

Date: 1/16/2016 3:19:00 PM

Excellent haiku. One of the best I've ever read. Thanks for the visit.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/15/2016 7:16:00 PM

Very nice Haiku. Yet the one in the picture does not look like a dove. Seems a crow or some other kind.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/16/2016 12:28:00 PM

Definitely not two doves but either a crow or raven ..I couldn't find a picture of two dove being stalked by a cat..I did put out the food tray with bead crumbs and bird seed though which drew in the doves..Sara

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/15/2016 8:59:00 AM

Ah - the beauty of the dove! I had a cat named Bilbo for many years - I still miss her. Nice words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Paul Callus

Date: 1/12/2016 2:43:00 PM

This is good, Sara...I can picture it so clearly...happens in my garden, too! I find it hard not to intervene! ~ Regards // paul

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 1/11/2016 6:44:00 PM

How very witty this little gem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2016 1:45:00 PM

- Lovely haiku, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2016 7:51:00 PM

Oh, great picture to put with it. Sara, my cat might stalk a bird but it wants nothing to do with eating it!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2016 4:19:00 PM

vivid show of a feline's cunning quality .. you did this so well, sara.. huggs!

White Sage

Date: 1/10/2016 3:39:00 PM

well written haiku, i hope the cat just falls off...nice write Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/10/2016 3:08:00 PM

OH....I hope cat isn't too smart. :) Lovely haiku, dear. Hope your new year has been good thus far. Hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2016 10:14:00 AM

Eileen, The cat doesn't get every animal or bird it goes after but she catches quite a few which is not to my liking.. Thanks for stopping by.. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 1/10/2016 3:04:00 PM

Oh you see it so often Sara - clever haiku:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/11/2016 10:12:00 AM

Jan, My cat just loves birds to eat and I love birds to watch and the two don't exactly go together for it is like inviting the birds in on a baited field.. Sara