Two Brothers Known As Time

One brother, not well-liked by me,
is friends with early light.
Born in a prior century,
he measures day from night.

He comes with neither fangs nor claws,
and yet it makes me cringe
to see him at my door because
he darkens evening’s fringe.

I much prefer his modern kin,
who from man’s tampering,
keeps coming round and round again
to greet us in the spring . . .

A rescuer this younger one!
His middle name implies
he lengthens days by helping Sun
prolong light in the skies.

That brother, Daylight Saving Time,
the one I like the best,
departs each fall. Oh, what a crime
He’s not a constant guest!


For the SAVING DAYLIGHT Poetry Contest of john lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babcock Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 6:52 PM
A creative comparison and well done on this one. Awesome my friend. love phyl
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Excellent comparison/contrast rhyming smoothly, creatively, well thought out.
A  Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
Harris Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 7:14 PM
A pleasure to read, Andrea, thank-you for sharing this.
Trichet Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Congrats Andrea, a very clever take on such a wonderful theme.
Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Good one Andie! Congrad's Light & Love
Duncan Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 10:25 PM
Nicely done,,,,, congrats on the win. I've wrote about 5-6 the last few night. The one I wrote last night, Hopes Angels or Angels Hopes, I can't figure which one I like . Hope all is well with you. I haven't been on line about 3 weeks xo's
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Such a wonderful poem, Andrea! Very unique and imaginative presentation on this subject. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Beautiful write, Andrea ,congratulations on your win. Blessings
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:05 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
A   Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:09 PM
Nice win. Love LINDA
Lawless Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Andrea, this poem had such a gentle lilt to it easing the rhythm and cadence into a timeless song. Thanks for being a part of this contest.
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Hi Andrea..I don't mind the clock being turned backward or forward, but I was alright too before all this started. Enjoyed your take on this theme; should do well. #7 // paul
Austin Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Good stuff. Daylight doesn't help the cold round here. It was zero all day yesterday. LOve, daver
Lamoureux Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Worthy of a second read!
Johnson Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 9:09 PM
I pay no mind to these two boys. Their game just usually annoys. But boy I will say this today. I cannot wait for the warmth of May. :) Peace. :)
Eastman Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 3:31 PM
A fun read.. Loved it.
Anish Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 1:58 PM
My Valentine's day was not so hot this year. My last girlfriend dumped me. However I do have a couple of women who seem interested. Once I was dating someone an we both entered a contest and she didn't. You women are putting us men to shame! There may even be a woman President next time. Nice rhymed poem. Belated Valenitne's day greetings
Meade Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Nicely done Andrea! You have dated both brothers and have chosen well -- mother earth and father time are rejoicing .. . as I am by visiting your words this morning. Always a delight for me.
Sathasivam Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Excellent. An entertaining write. Enjoyed. Tfs. Happy valentines day my dear
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 4:56 PM
This one has good rhythm and flow to it..Great topic..I enjoyed reading this contest entry..I am the opposite but wouldn't fuss if they would just put it in one place or the other and leave it there..Thanks for stopping by my work "I Care"..I have finished it and took it in a different way if you care to finish reading it...Sara
Hamilton Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 1:16 PM
a great poem Andrea love it 7 + fav hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 1:03 PM
So clever and entertaining!
Pinet Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:38 PM
The personification of time in both roles as a character adds to the fast pace set in this poem. You create magic with your words and release it to the page. Well done. Emile. #7
Peranteau Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Though I am not a big fan of this.....nope, I'm not going to say it....I'm not a big fan of day light savings time....but, I still enjoyed your write dear poet ! I always enjoy your writes ! Have a blessed weeking Andrea.....much love, james
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