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Two Boys of Tibet

Two boys of Tibet There was a young boy of Tibet Liked Swimming, but not getting wet He said he would try To swim when it’s dry What a silly young boy of Tibet   Another young boy of Tibet Had a Snowman he kept as a pet That’s abominable said I Yeti, couldn’t see why Elusive was that Boy of Tibet

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Date: 2/26/2018 2:43:00 AM
I like this one... ty for the comment... on My bullying poem.. have a blessed week.. wishing you the best..Tammy??
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Date: 2/6/2018 11:11:00 AM
Kevin, this is a very amusing limerick - well done!! It definitely provided several chuckles, so your use of the form was effective. I especially like how you tied together "Snowman", "abominable", and "Yeti" (love your use of this one as a surrogate for "Yet he"!) in consecutive lines in your second stanza without it seeming contrived. Nice! :) Bartholomew
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Kevin Shaw
Date: 2/6/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Bartholomew for your kind words, regards, Kevin
Date: 1/31/2018 9:33:00 PM
Very clever! And it's nice to read something pertaining to Tibet which isn't monkish, but rather 'monkey-ish.' Keep those limericks coming! Here's to humor and some good yuks! --Gershon
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Date: 1/26/2018 5:20:00 PM
ha ha ha very clever string of limericks Kevin:-) I do love the humour in this form:-) hugs jan xx
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Kevin Shaw
Date: 1/27/2018 2:47:00 AM
Thank You Jan, Regards, Kevin xx
Date: 1/26/2018 4:09:00 PM
Very clever, both! I admire what I cannot do - create limericks! I bet you have a knack, some people certainly do when it comes to limericks. Keep it up (I hope), they are very entertaining, just as the two above. A joy, Keven, and a giggle. Blessings ... CayCay
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Kevin Shaw
Date: 1/27/2018 2:48:00 AM
Thank you CayCay for your kind words, regards, Kevin xx

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