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Two Boats

A yacht named Archimedes passed Behind the local ferry, Both likely headed to complete Today’s itinerary. I know just where the ferry goes And what it’s like to ride it. As for the yacht, I’d love to see Exactly what’s inside it. My chance of doing that is nil, But not so with the ferry. How different would those two rides be? You know the answer - very!

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Date: 9/19/2023 4:14:00 PM
I somehow want to ride the ferry... as it feels like part of the larger picture. Well written. Great fun. Ann
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Date: 9/18/2023 3:48:00 PM
Ah, but to a lonely fisherman in a rowboat, wouldn't that ferry seem so luxurious? A great question Ilene. Loved it.
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:39:00 PM
Ha l like this Ilene….not sure which ride l would prefer!! Debx
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Date: 9/17/2023 12:17:00 PM
I would love to see a picture of the two boats - the contrast would be vast I am sure:-) hugs jan xx
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