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Two Becomes Three

Candles lit up in the dark Romantic movie--doors are locked Petals all across the bed From a rose so dark and red Wine is being chilled on ice So the flavors really nice A new nightgown of silk and lace To put a smile on his face Chocolate melted on a berry Making your mouth really merry For a special night of love To make an angel from above A little one to call your own And raise until she's finally grown Best Rhyme Forward Contest Sponsored by Chan The Man Written By Sweet Pea ( Robin )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/18/2013 10:20:00 AM
Robin, this is a lovely, sensuous, tender write. You deserved the win.
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Date: 12/11/2013 7:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win Robin, Nice one. I really loved it....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on the win, robin
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Date: 12/10/2013 8:47:00 PM
lovely win....Linda
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Date: 12/10/2013 3:43:00 PM
this is simply adorable. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/10/2013 12:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Robin - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2013 12:45:00 PM
Wow nice scene you have painted for me with your great ryhme sheme and powerful words you used. Such a portrayal! Great and creative title as well Robin. Such a romantic and beautiful poem you've written! Great poem! I love it! xoxo hugs and kisses all around for you my dear Robin! Keep on writing and I shall visit again with a cheerful smile and a handfull of sweet comments to send to you! beautiful! :)
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Date: 9/26/2013 9:54:00 AM
Two is always better than one. And three better than two. Blessed.
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Date: 9/26/2013 7:28:00 AM
- A beautiful and romantic poem, Robin! - Have a nice day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 7:10:00 PM
Hi Robin, A wonderful write about the wonders of love..Thanks for visiting my work.. Ken
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