Two Become One

Two doves Make love .

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/1/2015 5:40:00 AM

Dino James, I like this footle much.. :) weeee! here in Philippines traditional weddings include the bride and groom fleeing doves" male and female.. when these two is freed and if they come together and doesn't leave. old folks believe, it's like how the couples marriage will be.. :)! warmest hugs! //olive eloisaxx

James Fraser
Date: 4/2/2015 1:29:00 PM

Love the idea, message regarding the Doves Oliz. There's something dreamy about it, pure. Doves it shall be ;-) hugs//xx//DinoJamesxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/31/2015 5:13:00 AM

right on the mark, prince... enjoyed!.. huggs

James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 1:45:00 PM

Thank you always Princess for your kind words, hugs//James :) :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/30/2015 5:43:00 PM

Great footle my friend

James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 1:31:00 PM

Thank you kindly Tim, James :)

James Peranteau

Date: 3/30/2015 2:57:00 PM

I can't even spell the sound that came out of my throat when I read this write dear poet ! I definitely did gasp ! This towers among writes dear poet ! And I am certain that you yourself know the touch I have with terse writes.I have to say thank you for this one fine fellow poet ! Have a wonderful Spring James.....much love, james

James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 1:16:00 PM

Thought on a whim whilst at work James, whilst chatting to someone very special. Blessed Spring may it make your heart sing, many smiles for Noah and you kind Sir, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2015 2:10:00 PM

oh how gentle and romantic:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thank you Jan, hugs//James xx