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Two As One

She was desperately beautiful terribly sublime Her breath as sweet as candy cane her skin just so divine And when she walked the Angels stopped to marvel and adore Her every step a guiding light her presence to allure And then one day she took my ring my name she chose to share A lifetime of unending bliss —two hearts forever paired (Dreamsleep: September, 2023)

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Date: 9/25/2023 9:38:00 AM
Aw so sweet and romantic. Loved the rhyme.
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 9/25/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Karen.
Date: 9/25/2023 8:28:00 AM
Are you bragging or complaining? :)
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 9/25/2023 8:32:00 AM
Read the last two lines.

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