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Two seagulls on post Silhouetted by Bright orange sunrise

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/8/2013 6:38:00 PM

An animal haiku. Very nice.

Marcus Crane

Date: 1/27/2010 4:32:00 PM

wonderful haiku sarah .. a picture captured with just a few words ..i really enjoyed this one :)

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/15/2010 4:42:00 AM

Precious picture written in so few words! I found great pleasure in reading this poem. Keep writing my friend! God Bless You!

Brian Strand

Date: 1/7/2010 12:09:00 AM

Can see it now Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

John Freeman

Date: 1/6/2010 5:43:00 PM

Vivid imagery Sara, nice Haiku. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/6/2010 3:34:00 PM

This must be Florida for sure!?!? At least the South USA! I can see the image clearly. Nice haiku. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2010 12:24:00 PM

Lucky seagulls they are cause it must be warm looking at the bright orange sunrise.. such lovely words Sara.. thankxxx for your nice comment on my B.B. King poem.. just wanted to do something easy and simple for this one.. am exhausted by all the other ones I entered and its really difficult creating new things with distractions of all kinds sometimes... I noticed many submitted Haiiku's for Brian's Flow River Flow contest .. so I thought to do the same with Raul's contest.. luv.. ME

Danny Nunn

Date: 1/5/2010 8:10:00 PM

You have painted a pretty picture with just a few words...thanks on "Devil Talk'..gossip can sure mess a person up and if not given a chance to prove they are innocent..thanks Danny

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/5/2010 6:16:00 PM

A picturesque scene you have painted in so few words. Very wonderful haiku you have penned here Sara. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments. All is appreciated! God Bless! Have a wonderful evening~Mary

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/5/2010 4:52:00 PM

I wrote one for Carol Brown-brown honey

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/5/2010 2:31:00 PM

Reminds me of how much I miss Summer! Good write! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, Sara. Peace, Audrey

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/5/2010 1:48:00 PM

Only few days back I took some photographs of seagulls as I really love this sweet bird. Your love for seagull is also wonderful. Thanks for refreshing my memory by your beautiful short poem and thanks for your kind comments on my new poem Boatman's Song 1. Hope you would like its part 2 already posted today. Thanks With best wishes and love Ravindra

James Fraser

Date: 1/5/2010 1:08:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Sara >> James

P Sheart

Date: 1/5/2010 8:08:00 AM

You paint a beautiful picture with words here Sara! I so love the seaulls voice, call .A lovely Haiku. Keep writing!! Love Light Patty

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2010 8:02:00 AM

This sounds lovely........like a painting that I've admired! ~ Well done!~ Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/5/2010 6:56:00 AM

pretty, have you got over the baby sitting?