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Twins In Name Only

Pickles dressed up in black eight inch heels Tickles snuggled in flannel gown with toy eel Pickles danced all night To waning moonlight Pickles home late tripped over eel took spill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/17/2010 10:40:00 AM
Sara, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sara. The title is cute for it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 1:46:00 PM
hehe, nice one Sara - koolio Limerick. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your approach to unique humor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/15/2010 7:41:00 AM
I once dated a girl named Pickles, Sara. She did have a sister, but would never introduce me because she was afraid I might go "trippin" for her. Just had to say Congrats on the win. Dan C
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:56:00 PM
Haha. Many congratulations Sara for this win.
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:00:00 AM
Congrats Sara on this wonderful win in P.D.'s contest with this excellent and cute Limerick for your entry.. a brilliant idea for a write luv ..enjoyable to the reader ...still smiling ..luv.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with lots of luv.. hope all is well and u are doing better and are happy ...
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sara
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:09:00 AM
Good morning Sara, here i am posting congratulations on this silly contest,, by the way i have a blog,, it might need a little hello,, from the winners i have chosen,, have a wonderful Sunday,..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2010 7:00:00 PM
such a metaphorick piece with such an amusing story,, maybe somehow this sort of happened to someone you know,,,anyway all the best to you and yours,,and i want to Thank you for all your visits and all the words that you have left behind ,I am sorry I have been way to lax in my reading and commenting,,,Blessings..cecil
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Date: 11/5/2010 5:13:00 PM
I gotta know is that eel a metaphor? ;) LOL Light & Love
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Date: 11/4/2010 3:14:00 PM
This has the feel of an old Disney cartoon a la Silly Symphonies. Playful. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 11/2/2010 3:00:00 AM
interesting poem
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:19:00 PM
hahaha, you had them come to life. Great concept and it sounds like they got SLOSHED. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:57:00 PM
enjoyed readin today... funny stuff... poor cuces...
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Date: 10/30/2010 1:25:00 PM
lol made me smile and laugh...your crazy!!! loe this...luv Michael
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