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Twins In Name Only

Pickles dressed up in black eight inch heels
Tickles snuggled in flannel gown with toy eel
Pickles danced all night
To waning moonlight
Pickles home late tripped over eel took spill

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 10:40:00 AM

Sara, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2010 9:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Sara. The title is cute for it. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 11/15/2010 1:46:00 PM

hehe, nice one Sara - koolio Limerick. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sara in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 11/15/2010 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations Sara, on your approach to unique humor. Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/15/2010 7:41:00 AM

I once dated a girl named Pickles, Sara. She did have a sister, but would never introduce me because she was afraid I might go "trippin" for her. Just had to say that...lol. Congrats on the win. Dan C

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/14/2010 8:56:00 PM

Haha. Many congratulations Sara for this win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2010 8:00:00 AM

Congrats Sara on this wonderful win in P.D.'s contest with this excellent and cute Limerick for your entry.. a brilliant idea for a write luv ..enjoyable to the reader ...still smiling ..luv.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with lots of luv.. hope all is well and u are doing better and are happy ...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/14/2010 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/14/2010 4:09:00 AM

Good morning Sara, here i am posting congratulations on this silly contest,, by the way i have a blog,, it might need a little hello,, from the winners i have chosen,, have a wonderful Sunday,..p.d.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 11/5/2010 7:00:00 PM

such a metaphorick piece with such an amusing story,, maybe somehow this sort of happened to someone you know,,,anyway all the best to you and yours,,and i want to Thank you for all your visits and all the words that you have left behind ,I am sorry I have been way to lax in my reading and commenting,,,Blessings..cecil