Twins In Name Only

Pickles dressed up in black eight inch heels
Tickles snuggled in flannel gown with toy eel
Pickles danced all night
To waning moonlight
Pickles home late tripped over eel took spill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Sara, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sara. The title is cute for it. LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 1:46 PM
hehe, nice one Sara - koolio Limerick. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your approach to unique humor. Agape, Moses
Cwiak Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 7:41 AM
I once dated a girl named Pickles, Sara. She did have a sister, but would never introduce me because she was afraid I might go "trippin" for her. Just had to say that...lol. Congrats on the win. Dan C
Mannan Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:56 PM
Haha. Many congratulations Sara for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Congrats Sara on this wonderful win in P.D.'s contest with this excellent and cute Limerick for your entry.. a brilliant idea for a write luv ..enjoyable to the reader ...still smiling ..luv.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with lots of luv.. hope all is well and u are doing better and are happy ...
Mehta Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Sara
A   Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Good morning Sara, here i am posting congratulations on this silly contest,, by the way i have a blog,, it might need a little hello,, from the winners i have chosen,, have a wonderful Sunday,..p.d.
Hickman Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:00 PM
such a metaphorick piece with such an amusing story,, maybe somehow this sort of happened to someone you know,,,anyway all the best to you and yours,,and i want to Thank you for all your visits and all the words that you have left behind ,I am sorry I have been way to lax in my reading and commenting,,,Blessings..cecil
Guzzi Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 5:13 PM
I gotta know is that eel a metaphor? ;) LOL Light & Love
Keogh Jr. Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 3:14 PM
This has the feel of an old Disney cartoon a la Silly Symphonies. Playful. Regards, Gerard
Neshat Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 3:00 AM
interesting poem
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:19 PM
hahaha, you had them come to life. Great concept and it sounds like they got SLOSHED. LUv, Andrea
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October 30, 2010 at 2:57 PM
enjoyed readin today... funny stuff... poor cuces...
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October 30, 2010 at 1:25 PM
lol made me smile and laugh...your crazy!!! loe this...luv Michael
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